Screenshot / Kiddie Kingdom

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    I think maybe the yellow on yellow for the helicopter ride is a little too much (either the supports or track might be better served a more muted/subtle colour). Rest is lovely and colourful like a kid's area should be.

  • Kumba%s's Photo

    Great atmosphere. Could use a few more kid related details like entertainer meet-n-greets, but still a classy look. 

  • nin%s's Photo
    Can't wait for another 10 page G Force screen discussion.
  • ScOtLaNdS_FiNeSt%s's Photo

    Jeezus.... Gforce you have become pacV.2 really good. ^^^ I think dark red for the heli ride. 

  • Sulakke%s's Photo

    Very nice. I like the double yellow.

  • Austin55%s's Photo

    I'm glad you went with the American flag objects on the S&S :)

  • Liampie%s's Photo

    Digging the yellow. I'm also glad you went with a more open space here.

  • Jappy%s's Photo

    Nice kiddie zone. Glad to see your still working on this.

  • csw%s's Photo

    Don't change a thing

  • posix%s's Photo
    The openness helps so much. This is starting to breathe. Still find the foliage way too much of a feature. It needs to be more secondary.

    Hope you'll do some full blown themes at some point in the future. I feel the hyper realistic low-content amusement park stuff is old now.
  • G Force%s's Photo

    Thanks guys.  I think I'll keep the yellow, after experimenting a bit this seems to just work better than any other combination.  

     

    Kumba: Maybe something like that could be added, I'll see what I can do.

     

    Posix: I've wanted to do full blown theming at times, however I lack the creativity or vision to really pull it off in a satisfactory manner.  Plus, these are the kind of parks I know and love.  Building anything else feels foreign to me and just doesn't click.

  • A n d r e w%s's Photo

    Been waiting for a screen from you. Good to have you back. What have you been busy with?

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    this is lovely

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    Technically it's nice, but it just doesn't have much atmosphere...

     

     

     

     

     

    nah I'm just fucking with you. It's great.

  • alex%s's Photo

    Awesome screen. You've pulled together a lot of difficult colours but it's still really cohesive.

  • trav%s's Photo

    Great stuff. Why this is only at 76% I don't know.

  • Lagom%s's Photo

    Nice screen. Like the density of lamp posts.

     

    I'd change a few minor things:
    1. Change the colour of the roof on the small rides to black.
    2. Change the colour of the footers on the helicopter ride to grey.
    3. "Open" a few tables/benches for peeps to sit.

    How much is left to do until submission?

  • chemist%s's Photo

    Nice work G-Force compared to what you let me see. Coming along very very well.

  • G Force%s's Photo

    Thanks everyone.

     


    Been waiting for a screen from you. Good to have you back. What have you been busy with?

     

    Just life stuff, not as motivated either to spend all my free time playing either.  Pretty hard to keep up a screen every 2 weeks productivity forever.


    Nice screen. Like the density of lamp posts.

     

    I'd change a few minor things:
    1. Change the colour of the roof on the small rides to black.
    2. Change the colour of the footers on the helicopter ride to grey.
    3. "Open" a few tables/benches for peeps to sit.

    How much is left to do until submission?

     

     

    Thanks Lagom, I have actually made the grey the colors of the trim on the top of the awnings.  I think it looks a lot better than the grey or black like you suggested.  For the footers I'll try that, and when it comes to the tables I might go back and add some real benches to bring some life into the tables.

     

    Basically all I have left to do is surroundings (aka Trees).  There is a huge amount of space I have to fill so I can't really say how long it will take.  Also, I might go back an re-do the original entrance area, it was the first stuff I made on the map and doesn't really fit in with the rest of the map.  Need to save objects as well, and the old entrance is the first place to go.

     

    I still hope to have this done by the end of July.  But I'm not sure if that's still realistic all things considered.  Mid August will probably be a more probably release window, still need a logo and to make a few objects to save space.  Not sure how long either of those aspects will take, and considering my un-reliable motivation its hard to predict when I'll finish this. 

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