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17-May 16
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Not a fan of how sharp those diagonal corners are. Any chance you can round them off or something?
this reminds me of my entrance a bit but more detailed =D
The foliage in the planters is a bit dark and makes the complete picture a bit grimly. Lighter foliage would make it more cheerful. The building is really nice!
Edit: Agree with Liampie. The normal object would look better.
Make sure you don't hit the object limit this time. Don't build invisible objects.
Beautiful building, but I don't like the diagonal steel roofs and I agree with Liampie on the trackitecture and with Sulakke on the tree colours.
I agree with Liampie on the trackitecture. It's unnecessary in this case because the large rounded block would be much cleaner and serve the same purpose.
I also agree with the diagonal ends of the building. There needs to be some sort of "end", I would suggest having another slightly taller structure at each end instead of foliage.
Besides that, this is a wonderful screen.
Definitely Avanine, to see the same center dome but maybe slightly smaller on each side would make this much better.
Maybe make the color of your tree trunks different this time, they always bugged me in Baker Lake.
It would also look a lot better with different roof types, the metal kinds of kills the atmosphere.
Also try making those marble pillar fence pieces grey instead of white. I've found if you turn them grey it doesn't wash out the texture and actually fits in with other white objects better.
I think this is excellent, just want to see more.
I love it. Please actually finish it...
Agreed on the points about the harsh ends of the building. Something needs to be added there.
Otherwise just need more context and more finish.
if he added some tower like structures, it would look very very polished.
You seem to be missing these pieces: