Screenshot / The Rains of Castamere

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 9 years ago

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  Sulakke Offline

  I think the screen could improve a lot by adding some smaller details/objects to finish the buildings and the walls, as they are really bland. Think of adding chimneys, curtains, shutters, trims, overhangs, etc.

  posted 9 years ago

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  Iron Rattler Offline

  Thanks for the feedback. I definitely need to go back and add more detailing to the buildings. Do you have any feedback on the foliage? This is my first time using the colorable trees

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  Bubbsy41 Offline

  Thanks for the feedback. I definitely need to go back and add more detailing to the buildings. Do you have any feedback on the foliage? This is my first time using the colorable trees
  

  
  I'm no expert on foliage but the trees you have placed are all one color use some different colors and it always helps to look at other parks with a similar theme and see how those builders do their foliage.

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  Liampie Offline

  I think the building is pretty good actually. I don't think you need to force yourself to use more details, if you keep building and practicing that will come automatically. The overall composition and larger shapes are more important I think... I would make a distinction between horizontal surfaces for walking and horizontal surfaces that are just roof. You made them both grey. Don't forget to add battlements to the wall, either using that fence object or actual small blocks. Latter is probably the best because you have diagonal sections. If you do this, you should also remove those windows on the right because they will render the walls as defensive structures useless.
  
  Foliage needs work. 95% of the times the colourable trees look best in their original colours.
  
  Anyway, I think it's promising and I like seeing some Game of Thrones inspired stuff.

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  Sulakke Offline

  I agree with Liampie about the foliage. Use the default colors.

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