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  Version1 Offline

  Great screen, really looking forward for the release

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  Sulakke Offline

  That is nice. Love the colors and the atmosphere of this area. The paths and roofs are a little bland, especially along the wall of the dark ride. Street furniture will help a lot already, I guess. Maybe add an extra planter as well. And some TV's in the waiting line would add a lot of atmosphere. I hope you have some objects slots left to add realistic touches to the roofs to break them up. Paradoxically, I would remove the yellow decoration on the path. It does not add anything and will only glitch when you've added peeps. And I think you can and should avoid the glitching of the support in the bottom right corner of the screen.

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  Liampie Offline

  Use actual land instead of those landblocks at the bottom left. Will give you more than enough slots to add some blocks to the roof, which it desperately needs.

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  Jappy Offline

  Great facade, but the roof is soooo boring. I'm sure that even with so little object slots to spare you can make it a bit more interesting.

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  RWE Offline

  Really nice, but yeah you need to add some blocks to the roof!

   

  Looking forward to see this park!

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  FredD Offline

  Unboring the roof is the very last task to do, when I have object slots over

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  ida Offline

  ...so is it finished now, or are you releasing it unfinished because of the object limit?

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  Sulakke Offline

  You could delete the quarter blocks of the roof and put a steel quarter block or a flat deco piece on top to cover the gap. That does not cost extra slots.  And I agree with Liam, the quarter block landscaping is nice, but it does not add that much in this screen.

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  spacek531 Fan Offline

  This is really nice. It makes me want to go back and visit my own egypt buildings. Good work.

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  alex Offline

  Love the colours. I think you've overused the wooden support/fence around the queue. It looks a bit confusing because you're using it as fence as well as for the cover structures. I'd just use it for the covers and have something more subtle for the fence.

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  Louis! Offline

  I love it.

   

  I am really looking forward to a proper full scale release from you FredD, especially since you've improved in quality so much over the past years.

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  FredD Offline

  You could delete the quarter blocks of the roof and put a steel quarter block or a flat deco piece on top to cover the gap. That does not cost extra slots.  And I agree with Liam, the quarter block landscaping is nice, but it does not add that much in this screen.
  

  
  The roof is made out of 1 tile object, so I'll add some airco units on them but firstbI need to do other stuff like filling empty spots with foliage and backstage stuff. If that is done I can look at the roofs. It's not one of my priorities since peeps can't see the top of the roofs. First prority is to get the park properly finished.
  
  
  

  ...so is it finished now, or are you releasing it unfinished because of the object limit?
  

  
  I have to do some minor things like placing shops, paths etc... and it will be finished and submitted. It should be submitted this month I guess.

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  mintliqueur Fan Offline

  Looks great, a well done Egyptian theme never fails to please me.

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