G force's opinion is wrong. Boat doesn't need any extra color, it's already got the water, the sails, and different shades of brown. Color comes from the harbor.
maybe fill in the back tile on the crazy roof building? something about that one is off with me.
Great details. I really like the dead flowers on that building. I'd love to see you really push that and make a building covered in large patches of it almost like Ivy or something.
This looks great! I love the buildings, nice details and textures, they really have that gritty harbor feel to them. I say don't water the flowers, it's as if you've sort of discovered a new texture there that could be really useful for this kind of theme. Fresh flowers I think would kinda look too happy and pretty for a pirate-themed area.
Also, while the boat in general looks good and white sails work fine and all, I'll agree with G Force that some colour could probably add a lot to the feel, not least considering the theme. Try it!
Actually I'm not really feeling this screen as much... The architecture is blocky and flat, and that comebined with the layered walls make it looks like some beginner's experimenting. The barrel spam may be a bit over the top. The ship is quite messy and the proportions are off. I think the tallest mast is at least one tile too far to the back (look up ships with two masts), and I think the masts should be a little bit taller overall. I don't really like the sails much... Maybe be better looking, easier and more logical to go with hoisted sails. Despite my criticisms, there's not really anything outright bad here (other than the placement of the second mast) and the overall picture is atmospheric. A little splash of colour couldn't hurt (what colour did you use for the flowers?), but honestly I like the brownness here, it's texturally varied enough. Good textures, actually!
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Otsdarva Offline
Nice boat!
G Force Offline
Sails needs a splash of color, all the white is a little distracting. Maybe break up the path a bit as well, a bit to much for my taste.
inthemanual Offline
G force's opinion is wrong. Boat doesn't need any extra color, it's already got the water, the sails, and different shades of brown. Color comes from the harbor.
maybe fill in the back tile on the crazy roof building? something about that one is off with me.
Stoksy Offline
I agree with Tim here, sorry Russell, the sails are perfect white.
Scoop Offline
G Force Offline
This is what I ment by color.
Scoop Offline
fuck lol
nin Offline
This is fantastic. The white sails are perfect.
Turtle Offline
this is incredible
alex Offline
Great details. I really like the dead flowers on that building. I'd love to see you really push that and make a building covered in large patches of it almost like Ivy or something.
Dr_Dude Offline
dayyum
csw Offline
The flowers aren't meant to be dead, haha. I forgot to water them.
chemist Offline
haha the irony. This is some insane work though!
mintliqueur Offline
This looks great! I love the buildings, nice details and textures, they really have that gritty harbor feel to them. I say don't water the flowers, it's as if you've sort of discovered a new texture there that could be really useful for this kind of theme. Fresh flowers I think would kinda look too happy and pretty for a pirate-themed area.
Also, while the boat in general looks good and white sails work fine and all, I'll agree with G Force that some colour could probably add a lot to the feel, not least considering the theme. Try it!
Liampie Offline
Excited for this park. What is the size?
csw Offline
Not quite full size, but large enough to potentially have at least 4 full themed areas.
csw Offline
B-oats
Scoop Offline
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WnMptkO04VE