I don't think anything in this screen is "ugly" by any means, seems a bit harsh. I think the green building is fine, it's just not very interesting. Spicing it up could work, but even if you didn't, it's still fine.
Biggest thing for me personally is the right side of the screen; it needs more room to breathe I think. You have a great little shop there and then you have this huge coaster element right on top of it. I think pushing the shop back a tile or two with some planters in front of it will really open the area up and create a nice atmosphere.
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Liampie Offline
chorkiel Offline
The left side could use different shades of blue on the sign and building. Maybe for the umbrellas too. I don't mind its ugliness.
Faas Offline
Jappy Offline
I like it. It's just that the green makes it look like an ugly backstage building. I could use some livening up.
Louis! Offline
I actually love the left side. I think its better than the right side which we have seen exactly the same in 2 or 3 parks now.
FredD Offline
Pretty, you're improving. The green building could use another color or two.
Coasterbill Offline
Very few Corkscrew coasters have that arch support. It's really over-used on this site. Arrow evolved out of that pretty quickly.
Nice work though.
chemist Offline
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Austin55 Offline
Pretty sure people sit on their ass in chairs to...
Steve Offline
I don't think anything in this screen is "ugly" by any means, seems a bit harsh. I think the green building is fine, it's just not very interesting. Spicing it up could work, but even if you didn't, it's still fine.
Biggest thing for me personally is the right side of the screen; it needs more room to breathe I think. You have a great little shop there and then you have this huge coaster element right on top of it. I think pushing the shop back a tile or two with some planters in front of it will really open the area up and create a nice atmosphere.
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chemist Offline
scoop dont get lazy now man when you put that much work into it. Put those god damn chairs! lol
nin Offline
Not a fan of the umbrella colors. Looks good, but listen to those above.