Screenshot / Brown Derby Restaurant & Shop

  • 15-April 16
screen_2903 Brown Derby Restaurant & Shop

16 Comments

  • Comment System%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Comment System Offline
    comment below
    posted 9 years ago
  • Sulakke%s's Photo
    Netherlands Sulakke Offline

    The shape of the buildings is magnificent, but everything is so textureless. A very good start. Now add some more textures and details!

    posted 9 years ago
  • nin%s's Photo
    United States nin Offline

    Still needs work on color. The white sucks all of the attention, the balcony still doesn't work (keep it the pink/beige that the rest of the building is). Add more detail as Sulakke said.

    posted 9 years ago
  • dr dirt%s's Photo
    United States dr dirt Offline
    A little bit of refinement and this'll be amazing - I've always liked your building style. I think your style requires the textures to be impeccably clean, which could use some improvements here. Castle/cement clash will never look good, unfortunately. Also maybe either black or dull red for the flat roofs with a little trim might look good instead of the white.
    posted 9 years ago
  • dr dirt%s's Photo
    United States dr dirt Offline
    Oh and consider throwing in a little brick texture here and there because it looks good in the colors you've got going here.
    posted 9 years ago
  • RWE%s's Photo
    Germany RWE Offline

    This is not bad. With a few changes this could be pretty good work. The white doesn't work, i would suggest changing it to black, you definitely need to add more details and other colors than this pink. For details just play around with some windows, fences and other little objects and you'll see, you can do wonders with little things. Just try to make this building more inviting and appealing and this will be amazing.

     

    Just take yourself some time and work on everything, until you think it is perfect. Be skeptical with yourself! You'll see: It's worth it!

    posted 9 years ago
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Netherlands Liampie Offline
    Personally I think flat roofs almost always look best if their colour is darker than the surroundings. Makes the actual facades and the streets stand out more. Black in this case is the way to go. For the rest I echo Sulakke! Not bad at all. Even though you're taking your sweet time with it, you've improved so much since you arrived here... You were a dark horse after all.
    posted 9 years ago
  • Dark_Horse%s's Photo
    United States Dark_Horse Offline

    Wow, thanks for all the comments, guys.  I appreciate them, and have taken the advice and constructive criticism.  I've added some more details and changed some details around, and I believe it looks even better now:

    brownderbyrestaurant002.jpg

    posted 9 years ago
  • G Force%s's Photo
    United States G Force Offline
    Looks so much better now, really solid work.
    posted 9 years ago
  • Sulakke%s's Photo
    Netherlands Sulakke Offline

    You could still add some more textures to the walls, but besides that it looks great. Nice work and good to see you using commentary to improve your work.

    posted 9 years ago
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Louis! Offline

    A massive improvement!

    posted 9 years ago
  • RWE%s's Photo
    Germany RWE Offline

    This is much better! Good work!

    posted 9 years ago
  • Dark_Horse%s's Photo
    United States Dark_Horse Offline
    Whoever gave this a 60%, I have no idea what you were thinking voting that high. Bland walls, horrid color choices, poor cropping. I mean what is Restauran t & Shop? No excuses for this lackluster, lifeless screen.
    posted 4 years ago
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Netherlands Liampie Offline

    Not quite as unreasonable as 0%. Just vote for what you think it's worth. Skewing the score is dumb.

    posted 4 years ago
  • Dark_Horse%s's Photo
    United States Dark_Horse Offline
    Well I truly believe everything I have shown is worth 0% . I even gave my reasons why. Probably one of the worst things I've shown. Super undetailed. I highly doubt this would truly be worth more than about 45-50% at best and that's being generous.
    posted 4 years ago
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Netherlands Liampie Offline

    Well I truly believe everything I have shown is worth 0% .

     

    No you don't.

    posted 4 years ago
  • Dark_Horse%s's Photo
    United States Dark_Horse Offline
    Pretty sure I do. I will be discontinuing all current projects I am working on. I may decide to completely restart them at a later date.
    posted 4 years ago

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