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  • Comment System%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Comment System Offline
    comment below
    posted 9 years ago
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Netherlands Liampie Offline
    Layout looks awesome.
    posted 9 years ago
  • Version1%s's Photo
    Germany Version1 Offline

    Great Screen

    posted 9 years ago
  • Jappy%s's Photo
    Belgium Jappy Offline

    Cool stuff.

    posted 9 years ago
  • F0ndue%s's Photo
    United States F0ndue Offline

    Looks great, but I'm not too much of a fan of the rock texture under the coaster. 

    posted 9 years ago
  • FredD%s's Photo
    Belgium FredD Fan Offline

    I watched you build this in a stream yesterday or so?! And already finished?... Amazing. It looks so wonderful and so much fun. I like the name also, fits a Worlds of Fun park well :p Foliage is great.

    posted 9 years ago
  • Stoksy%s's Photo
    Australia Stoksy Offline

    The sign looks phenomenal.

    posted 9 years ago
  • thirteen%s's Photo
    Germany thirteen Offline
    This looks delicious. Love the atmosphere of this.
    posted 9 years ago
  • posix%s's Photo
    Germany posix Offline
    Really think you still want to reduce the overpowering greenery. You give it too much attention, and it covers up the park too much.
     
    I wish you would start to explore different types of stylistic expression. This looks like it could be out of Westwinds. I want to see your sense for atmosphere and mood, for colour, for light and shadow, for visual depth.
    posted 9 years ago
  • Scoop%s's Photo
    United States Scoop Fan Offline

     I honestly could care less about whether or not if it looks like westwinds or anything else you have built. As long as it looks good and achieves the style that you want then I think it's fine. On that note I think you need to start building for yourself rather than NE as a whole. One thing I have notice from talking with you and watching streams is that you don't care what you build but what you build for other people on NE. All I'm trying to say is keep doing you man. :p Other than that the sign looks dope, the coaster layout is awesome, and it definitely screams Worlds of Fun.

    posted 9 years ago
  • Coasterbill%s's Photo
    United States Coasterbill Offline
    ^ This... and personally I love this.
    posted 9 years ago
  • Faas%s's Photo
    Netherlands Faas Offline

    Looks like an awesome coaster. Good job!

    posted 9 years ago
  • trav%s's Photo
    United Kingdom trav Offline
    Very nice. It might be the typical generic style that you pump out, but it's my favourite screen of yours in that typical style.
    posted 9 years ago
  • Steve%s's Photo
    United States Steve Offline
    Station looks great. Overall this looks great. Layout does indeed look badass, too. I think that tower on the transfer shed with the flag could use better placement. It could be on or directly off of the main station so it could be presented as a nice element rather than an afterthought. Would make the station even more interesting (not that it isn't already). Great work!
    posted 9 years ago
  • nin%s's Photo
    United States nin Offline
    This and the Arrow are my favorite things in the park. I like but the queue, but I guess it'll just have to do.
    posted 9 years ago
  • G Force%s's Photo
    United States G Force Offline

    Thanks guys, I should say, credits to Pacificoaster for the superb layout.

     

    @Steve, the tower is sort of there to allow the dormers on the transfer roof to line up with the windows.  Otherwise there would be a two tile space on one side or the other, kind of felt like I had to do something to fill in the space, and this was probably the best option.  I'm not 100% happy with the placement, but it will probably have to do unless the ending bit of the layout is changed to allow for a different roof.

     

    @Posix, I'd love to do some more interesting stuff stylistically, however, I just don't have the eye or feel for it to make it up to the standards I would like.  Plus, kind of like Scoop said, this is more the stuff I enjoy, and know well, which benefits it a lot.  A lot of the rest of the park is a little lacking because its not quite what I want to build, but more what I feel like I have to.  If that makes sense.

     

    In the future though I plan to do some more interesting stuff, I guess for now however, this will have to do.

     

    When it comes to trees, I'm trying to find a balance between creating the most intense ride from a peep perspective and the most visually appealing from the RCT perspective.  Guess that balance is a little off here, as some have said.  I'll look into it and try to improve.

    posted 9 years ago
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Netherlands Liampie Offline
    Regarding the foliage, I think your open spaces here are too cramped to work. Another tip for you: when placing trees, make a distinction between 'solid trees' and 'see-through trees'. The see-through trees are much more suitable to put in front of scenery. From your foliage selection that is the chinese cedar (can look weird isolated), the birch and the corsican pine. Optionally you can add another tree to the mix in selected places. Makes things more interesting and varied. Anyway. Where would I use such trees: definitely instead of the big green bush in front of the station, the small tree cluster to the right of the sign, and in front of the queue entrance (which is completely obscured now). I always try to visually connect al my paths, makes for a much better flow although your parks generally flow pretty well.
    posted 9 years ago
  • Austin55%s's Photo
    United States Austin55 Offline

    Nebraska 

    posted 9 years ago

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