I LOVE this! Agree on the fences, but also I think that the path is too straight. Weird, I know, but having a path that follows the flow of the mountainis nice too.
Don't mind the foliage too much, some odd textures but it works for the most part. I do think that the coloured flower-work could be improved though; too random at the moment. Make clearer lines/patches/forms.
The fences are just too flimsy, like a weird unnatural rope. Either have poles closer together, or try to find a more solid-looking fence eg. what G Force is using a lot of in WoF.
Dj makes a good point about the path. It's parallel with the straight section of the coaster, but it might be cool to have the path frame the coaster a little more eg the turnaround as well. At least initially, it can curve back the other way by the time it gets to the lift.
I'm all for organic shapes and irregular paths and stuff, but actually I think this piece of straight path looks fine and credible. I agree that the fences look a bit weird. The roadlines don't have the best texture, and neither do the inclined pieces, and they don't exactly go well together. Colours are spot on though. In the whole screen. Very pleasant! Just fix the foliage, please. All the different graphics look horrible together, yet they blend together so that the individual trees are hardly recognizable anymore.
I like everything except for that one tree in the bottom right. It's just an ugly object.
Some people have also mentioned the fencing being ugly but I don't really mind it that much, however if better objects were available it would probably look better. Maybe I'll have a look at it.
Those two ride styles stacked are super convincing. Nice job! About the foliage, I think you could get the same point across without the use of the cheezy "zoo tycoon" foliage objects.
Even though I actually don't mind the foliage I'd like to see you change up the colors so everything doesn't blend. Maybe add some darker colors to add contrast. The fences look a bit thin but for what your trying to do with them, it looks pretty good. Other than that I really enjoy this and can't wait to see more.
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Comment System Offline
G Force Offline
Foliage is a little out of control, maybe not so many custom bushes and trees, they conflict with the RCT aesthetic that you nailed with the Coaster.
Austin55 Offline
Those fences are awful but thats really just the object. Object makers- make us new fences. Do it for phann.
The coaster looks nice, the layering looks really good especially on the banked drop.
djbrcace1234 Fan Offline
I LOVE this! Agree on the fences, but also I think that the path is too straight. Weird, I know, but having a path that follows the flow of the mountainis nice too.
Dr_Dude Offline
i like the foliage tbh
Stoksy Offline
Don't mind the foliage too much, some odd textures but it works for the most part. I do think that the coloured flower-work could be improved though; too random at the moment. Make clearer lines/patches/forms.
The fences are just too flimsy, like a weird unnatural rope. Either have poles closer together, or try to find a more solid-looking fence eg. what G Force is using a lot of in WoF.
Dj makes a good point about the path. It's parallel with the straight section of the coaster, but it might be cool to have the path frame the coaster a little more eg the turnaround as well. At least initially, it can curve back the other way by the time it gets to the lift.
Louis! Offline
I love this.
Poke Offline
Looks great. Nice to see a new aesthetic.
Liampie Offline
chorkiel Offline
I like the foliage.
Goliath123 Offline
thought it was a new track type tbh
Coasterbill Offline
Recurious Offline
I like everything except for that one tree in the bottom right. It's just an ugly object.
Some people have also mentioned the fencing being ugly but I don't really mind it that much, however if better objects were available it would probably look better. Maybe I'll have a look at it.
James The Furry Offline
disneylandian192 Offline
Those two ride styles stacked are super convincing. Nice job! About the foliage, I think you could get the same point across without the use of the cheezy "zoo tycoon" foliage objects.
dr dirt Offline
I love this. Not sure if the large tropical tree really fits in, though. The track looks really awesome.
djbrcace1234 Fan Offline
I'm a phann of this too!
robbie92 Offline
I actually adore this foliage
Bubbsy41 Offline
phann Offline
The rounded out path objects glitch with the roadline fences, therefore I wont use them. I hope this is better.
I also fixed the foilage a bit, I hope it is a bit more ordered now.
Thanks for all the comments, greatly apreciated.