Screenshot / Thunderstrike revamped

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • G Force%s's Photo

    Path is super distracting, I'd try to use a completely different texture completely and utilize road lines to define the transitions from path type to path type, it helps clean up the work a lot.  The rest is quite good, you do have a nack for foliage and little things.  The architecture is a bit bland though, to many steel roofs creating somewhat boring buildings.  

     

    The station still looks great though, as does the coaster.

  • Goliath123%s's Photo

    I really like it

  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    Not a fan of the trim + brick post fences that you're using. Also, the brick + crazy paving is a bit distracting like G Force said, especially in a relatively large area.

  • Xeccah%s's Photo

    Think about symmetry and path width when you are mixing paths like these. Otherwise I love this. I actually do like the fencing you are using and I'd say only find a cleaner way to execute it. This reminds me of a really old design I was making where Liam did some foliage work like this.

  • AvanineCommuter%s's Photo

    What G Force said. That path needs to change. 

  • posix%s's Photo

    Good. Very nicely flowing paths, 360 guest perspective. Perhaps aesthetically a bit bland. Too many spiky trees that make this look stiff and uneasy. Maybe try darker colour for the central crazy-paving path veign.

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    Very nice!

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    really nice! very organic

  • Poke%s's Photo

    Really great foliage and spacing. Though, you have imo too many roof types going on.

  • alex%s's Photo

    I think the path textures work fine together (and are fine without road lines). The pattern shapes are awkward however - I think I'd just stick with simple rings around planters and other features like the ride entrances rather than that long central stripe.

    Also I think you should add a flat piece of track after the swooping turn on the woodie before it hits the hill. It'll look more flowing.

  • Chocotopian%s's Photo

    Lovely work on the custom brick planter in the centre. The domed roof effect you've created looks good too. I think you certainly have an eye for small/medium sized buildings.

  • Description

    So after I finished skylands I had just enough motivation to go back to this area and redo it since I didn't like how dense the buildings were before. I am not sure what I am going to do with this park yet, but I have two wooden coaster designs I am really proud of so the plan is to make a small wooded/hilly park to showcase them.


    I feel like my peepable buildings are a big step back from skylands but I am enjoying working with things other than trees and rocks for a change.

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