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  • Comment System%s's Photo
    comment below
  • G Force%s's Photo
    Starpointe v3 let's go
  • chemist%s's Photo

    Starpointe v3 let's go

     

    haha 

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    The path under the entrance seems so unnatural.

     

    To the point where I actually thought it was added into the screenshot from somewhere else in the map.

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    The path under the entrance just draws attention to the fact that the ticket booths and entrance aren't centered and now it's driving me batshit.

  • Bubbsy41%s's Photo
    Favorite screen of your very nice would just change the path near the enterance
  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    other than the tan paths I like it. They frame that building in a way that makes it feel really isometric/fake and its disconcerting :p

  • PizzaWurscht%s's Photo

    Starpointe v3 let's go
    whats starpointe v2 ?

     

    i fully agree with louis. 

  • nin%s's Photo

    To the point where I actually thought it was added into the screenshot from somewhere else in the map.

     Did a double take to realize it's not two screens.

     

    Also yes to Starpointe. First thing I thought of.

  • chemist%s's Photo

    well another fail.

  • Bubbsy41%s's Photo

    well another fail.


    It's not a fail by any means. Just some things to change, like playing around with path types and such. You can't take criticism so seriously or you'll never actually finish anything. I would stop comparing it to others and just build for the fun of it. Because I wanna see this finished and I actually really enjoy it and think it will be a great little release.
  • Coasterbill%s's Photo


    well another fail.

     

    The screen has a 60% (silver quality) rating. That's really good, especially when slight modifications can improve it greatly.

  • chemist%s's Photo

    Thanks Bubbsy and Coasterbill, and to everyone else for the comments. It just sucks, I try and try but I still fail to get that one good screenshot for yall. Its kind of frustrating because I want people to like my stuff but I keep going a few steps back. Idk, maybe im taking it too personal. 

     

    As for the park entrance being a little off, I have a roller coaster near the entrance thats kind of in the way so i had to push the entrance to the left..I know it looks off but It wont bother so much once I add my extra buildings.

  • Version1%s's Photo

    Dude, the screen is completely fine, I would be happy to build something like that. You just have to lose one or two objects and use different colors/textures. But the architecture is good.

  • Faas%s's Photo
    The fact that we give tips on how to improve this screen is not the same as us saying it sucks and you should stop playing. How can you improve if you take all tips as reasons to start an existential crisis? Stop taking shit so personal please, it makes you look like a little kid.
  • AvanineCommuter%s's Photo
    Remember Stoksy's amazing Cathedral screen just posted this week? I gave him a lot of critique on how to improve it despite the fact that it was stunning and beautiful as it is. According to your logic, that make his screen a fail... Which is ridiculous to be honest.

    You have to STOP building for the approval of others. Why is it so important for you to have us go wow over a screen? Why is that so important? I'm seriously stumped.
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    If you do build to get good scores, at least make sure the screen is finished. What's there is very good, I think. Your most cohesive screen yet. The computer screens in the ticket booths are a great touch.
  • G Force%s's Photo

    If you do build to get good scores, at least make sure the screen is finished. What's there is very good, I think. Your most cohesive screen yet. The computer screens in the ticket booths are a great touch.

    Not surprising its his best as it an object for object copy of Starpointes entrance. Colors are different but worse than the original. I like the lamp post in the front and the path infront.
  • Louis!%s's Photo

    You have the wrong attitude towards screens and the feedback you get on them.

     

    Not one person here has told you it sucks or that it is bad.

  • Coupon%s's Photo


     

     

    whats starpointe v2 ?

     

     

    westwinds

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