Screenshot / Astroland @Asbury Park

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • G Force%s's Photo
    Path layout could be a bit more organic, look at Belmont by geewhzz for some ideas on this style park.
  • Chocotopian%s's Photo

    I like the way the roof of the boat station extends across part of the water, and the way the riders are free to peddle into the fountain if they want. However, I think many of your buildings are too square, and that the whole area has a very grid-like feel. I agree with G Force in that you should attempt a more organic layout.

  • AvanineCommuter%s's Photo

    Is it just me or does the sentence "The Holocaust never happened." seem a little... off? :p

  • Chocotopian%s's Photo

    I tried to ignore that bit...

  • MCI%s's Photo

    I mean technically he´s right.

    In the early 20th century (pre 1939) the holocaust hasn´t happened (yet).

  • SensualEthiopianPolice%s's Photo

    Thanks for the advice, its really useful. I'll get to working on that ASAP. But I love the way the teacups and boat hire came out, so I might do minimal changes there.

  • AvanineCommuter%s's Photo


    I mean technically he´s right.

    In the early 20th century (pre 1939) the holocaust hasn´t happened (yet).

     

     

    It would be more correct to say "The holocaust hasn't happened yet" rather than "The holocaust never happened" which would imply that it will never happen within that timeline.

     

    But I guess more importantly: just wondering what all of that has to do with this park?

  • MCI%s's Photo


    It would be more correct to say "The holocaust hasn't happened yet" rather than "The holocaust never happened" which would imply that it will never happen within that timeline.

     

    But I guess more importantly: just wondering what all of that has to do with this park?

     

     

    You´re right of course. I was just trying to get my mind in a 1920 setting, from that persepective... hell fuck it.

     

    I do like to make jokes about inproper things, but c´mon man the Holocaust isn´t something you should joke about. Especialy not know with Trump on the rise and the right wing bastards gaining way too much ground in europe.

  • G Force%s's Photo

    Screen comments are not a place for politics, international and especially American.

  • nin%s's Photo

    Cool ideas, execution is a bit weak. Look at real structures, study their forms and recreate them as best you can.

    Learn the fundamentals, then get crazy with it.

  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    I just can't figure out where this holocaust thing came from so I'm laughing at AvanineCommuter just saying that out of the blue

  • bigshootergill%s's Photo

    I just can't figure out where this holocaust thing came from so I'm laughing at AvanineCommuter just saying that out of the blue

    Looks like the admins removed it from his description, which is just pure wisdom! 

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