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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Recurious%s's Photo

    I like the phone booth, the 2 buildings in the top are also great.

  • RWE%s's Photo

    I really like this! Im looking forward for this park!

  • Lagom%s's Photo

    I like this too. The transfer section is interesting. Your buildings are nice. I like the top building, but it looks little bit empty inside. Maybe you could add some map racks inside as well. The backstage area looks a little bit empty too. Maybe some containers could do the trick.

    Overall a very nice screen! Like this a lot. I'm looking forward to see more.

     

  • Xeccah%s's Photo

    its alright i suppose. i'd like to see this theme not anchored down by the "conventions" of realism, but i can't blame you for that because that's stylistic.

     

    you have some cool aesthetics going on, but i feel you could have done so much more if you lost the dutch all together and well balls deep in the atmosphere. feels safe right now.

  • G Force%s's Photo

    Maybe add a support where the wide turn hits the diagonal.  Seems a bit unsupported to me.  Looks great otherwise, maybe a little heavy on the steel roofs though.

     

    EDIT:  There is a lot of grey as well, maybe swap out the gray path for some brick type. Maybe implement some diagonal path transitions as well. 

  • csw%s's Photo

    I think the TARDIS needs some more emphasis. From what I know, it's a huge part of Doctor Who, so perhaps try making it bigger or elevating it or putting a garden around it or putting it at a bigger path intersection. Something to make it stand out more. 

  • nin%s's Photo

    Listen to csw. This is the iconic structure of the area and it's partly covered by track from this angle. I'd move the thing over by a tile to be in the center of that path and away from obstructions.

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