Screenshot / Entrance Offically done
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20-February 16
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Thank you bill =)
nice little turnstiles
This is probably some of the best stuff you've show, especially that entrance.
But you dont need to show us every little thing you make, dont turn into a shotguns and post screens of every two hours of work you do.
Finish and polish off a screenshot and it will make all your work much more appealing to look at.
if I posted a screen for every two hours of work it would be the same screen but with two more trees placed
I also agree about less screens.
I don't think that building/stall works directly infront of the entrance, nor the long planter. It cuts the space up too much where I think you need it more open. Plus the building itself is a little bland. I'd delete it personally and make a nice fountain or something.
I really like the colours your using though. Olive green/dark blue/browns is such a unique combo but it works well.
Honestly, this is a really boring screen. Not because it's bad. Not only because you've already mostly shown us this stuff before. Mostly because there is really nothing interesting in the screen. You cut of most of the entrance and pretty much focused this screen on a planter.
Thank you guys, and i cut out the screens every couple of hours lol.
Thanks alex, ehh the building in the front of the entrance is for park maps so i thought it was kinda logical to put one once you enter the park. And I kinda based this off of certain park I seen.
Lol maybe your delusional b/c when i see your work, you have "boring" stuff. Let alone anything from rct2..sooo im not taking advice from someone who cant back it up. Also I did not focus on the planters, I focused on the entrance when you walk in.
Dude, if that's your way of thinking, then you better stop visiting this site. This attitude is shit and insults someone, who gave his honest opinion to help you.
You can hate me or love me , end of the day I listen to the right critics and make changes .
I'm not trying to be a asshole but more like me being real . The guy barely has any work posted and calls me boring . And said all I showed was planters which wasn't the case. I was trying to show the detail of the entrance while walking in . And I cut off some of the pic bc I didn't want to show the rest, keep it teaser like .
Not sure how it's a insult if I'm speaking my opinion , not everyone is a nice guy and I can tell u now I'm not . I tried being a nice guy on here and it ends up hurting myself in the end . Changing my park to someone else mindset on how they want the park and I completely lose focus on what I had in mind on what I wanted to build . If you are a good park builder and give me criticism I'll definitely take it bc you have successful parks you actually made . Makes complete sense to listen to someone who can back up what they are saying .
Though Chorkiel is 100% right, there is almost nothing to see at this screen. Don't get why you chopped up the entrance?!
And please change your attitude. No one is criticizing you because they like it. Take critic as help to get better because another person's point of view is always interesting. Someone else can point things out you didn't see or forgot. And therefore they don't have to be a parkmaker...
It's funny this screen gets 74% while there's almost nothing to see. 30% it is for me.
fred just because I got a rating you think I don't deserve your going to try to make it lower by giving me a 30% ? That sounds more like a personal issue you have with me and my attitude . No way it's worth 30% but it's okay , I see how you roll . I'm not even going to be spiteful and put low score on some of your pics .
No, 30% because almost half the screen is unfinished and there's almost nothing interesting to see. That could be a 60 or 70 or higher if the screen was bigger, with more content, and finished. If you want to act childish and give extra low scores on my screens, go ahead. I don't care
That was literally the first thing you wrote about chorkiel. That's an insult and that doesn't have a place here on NE. Plus, I don't know how you can be "proud" of not being a nice guy. Because usually, assholes just don't really notice, that they are indeed hurting the people they interact with. There is something seriously wrong with you, when you pride yourself with not being nice.
The fact is, that you are very welcome to speak your opinion. But here's the kicker: YOU HAVEN'T ACHIEVED ANYTHING HERE. You insult and attack someone that tried to help you because he "hasn't build anything" when you haven't either. I know you think that you are a great builder, but you don't even seem to grasp the easiest concepts of supporting a coaster, and it's not like your theming is on a level with the all time greats on NE.
The matter of fact is, that you are free to ignore criticism. You totally are. But you know what: You don't have the right so bash someone for trying to help you. That's peoples problem with your attitude, and I'm actually shocked that there is someone on NE with such an attitude.
The screen is nice, the two types of brick paving is odd and I don't think the line between them is the right colour either. I also tihnk the entrance doesn't match what is beyond the entrance (this is in reply to your other screens really). Its a nice structure, but it has this sort of african/tropical vibe that the rest of the architecture doesn't match.
Having attitude, or being a bitch is acceptable on NE. However its only really acceptable for a few members who have established themselves.
G Force used to have a terrible attitude not too long ago, but then he changed his attitude, and improved at the same time, and now he is a fantastic member of the site.
Plus, there's only room for 1 bitch at NE. And that's me.