Screenshot / l'flumme

30-January 16

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posted 9 years ago
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soluna Offline

medusa wall 4/10

also, the dull red doesn't really go well on the flume track itself. it works for the tunnel
posted 9 years ago
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Xeccah Offline

the fact that you can't comprehend the textural wonder that is the medusa wall is saddening to me. i'm praying for you, kid.
posted 9 years ago
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MCI Offline

The waiting time screen (?) in the left is genius.
posted 9 years ago
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Lagom Fan Offline

Beautiful screen! Good job
posted 9 years ago
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posix Offline

Beautiful. Think you're forcing yourself to use too many objects sometimes. Those fences? Try cleaning up your style a bit.
posted 9 years ago
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Lotte Offline

l'flumme? Je rate ton vocabulaire et grammaire français 5/7
posted 9 years ago
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Liampie Offline

Agreed with posix. It's good but it can be better.

I have no issues with having one of those overly complex fences, but you vary your fences so much in a seemingly random way that it doesn't help in creating an immersive cohesive area. Then there are details like the weird cart+awnings thing and the random red glass wall on the right... Lastly I think a more neutral colour for the log flume (brown or black) will improve the atmosphere significantly, but I can easily see how people would disagree on that.
posted 9 years ago
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alex Offline

Love the architecture and those wall textures. This is more finished than the majority of your screens but I'm disappointed you didn't finish off the foliage and landscaping at the top or the paths in the lower right. Would have taken no time at all and made the screen look way more polished.
posted 9 years ago
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Steve Offline

Agreed with both posix and Liam.
posted 9 years ago
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RCT2day Offline

Cute use of the Medusa wall, where'd you think of that?
posted 9 years ago
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G Force Offline

Train is forced AF, makes those buildings in the right look as if you just deleteded the back halfs of them to lay the train down.
posted 9 years ago
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RMM Offline

despite being a 'superior' game, it's still a weak cover, at best, of loopy's work.
posted 9 years ago
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inthemanual Offline

Technically wonderful, but there's not much that's really exciting here. Nothing really stands out to me. Maybe some more contrast would help? Right now everything seems too brown, and the only thing that isn't is the flume
posted 9 years ago
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Psi Offline

Is that a ghost object under the drop? The amount of dirt is too much

Love that medusa wall tho keep it up
posted 9 years ago
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Cocoa Offline

despite being a 'superior' game, it's still a weak cover, at best, of loopy's work.

This. Loopys work has this aesthetic and flow to it thats lacking here.
posted 9 years ago
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nin Offline

the fact that you can't comprehend the textural wonder that is the medusa wall is saddening to me. i'm praying for you, kid.

Trying using the Texas Giant sign.
posted 9 years ago
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AvanineCommuter Offline

l'flumme? Je rate ton vocabulaire et grammaire français 5/7

et toi, rater = 'to fail' ou "to miss" en français, mon ami.
posted 9 years ago
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