Screenshot / Fort Fun (name in progress)

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  Mattk48 Offline

  I wish there was more room for this stuff to breath. I think three or four tiles filled with foliage in between the junior coaster and the play structure would have been beneficial. But its probably too late for that now.

   

  I think you should change the brown tarmac patch in the middle there to something different. Maybe dark brown, or wooden tiles that match the rest of the structure

   

  I don't know if that black tarmac path to the swinging ship is working for me.

   

  Despite what I said above everything is really well done, especially the play structure, that thing is awesome. Just consider changing some minor details 

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  G Force Offline

  Change the color of the leaves on the birch trees to the moss green.  The foliage also seems a bit grid like near the water, its fine now but in the future see if you can use some different objects to make it seem a bit more natural.

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  nin Offline

  but where do the pteradon flyers go

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  Austin55 Offline

  Foliage needs work for sure, very artificial looking. I'd also try make the waterfall more natural, rather than a long flat line.

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  battle boy Offline

  Very cool idea with this fruit.

  the rest for me "pretty cozy"

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  Scoop Offline

  I'm not trying to complain or anything but I'm just wondering the reasoning of the 25% vote.

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  Liampie Offline

  So many trims... That and the poor and random colour combinations turn this into a mess, atlhough not without potential. I think the placement of the swinging ship is very nice, especially the exit path. But why is it black?.

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  Faas Offline

  Vitaminland would like to buy that junior coaster.

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  Chocotopian Offline

  I think the foliage along the waterfront looks very patchwork-like, and might benefit from a height reduction to open up the area a bit and allow guests a view of the lake. Only around the waterfront though, as I think the other foliage looks great, and the rockwork around the ship is pretty neat as well. Nice structure on the station too!

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