I like this. The diagonal brake run looks nice. I think you should remove the rope fences in the places you used the wooden fences. I don't see the utility of having a double fence.
Any way you could make that rapids barrier out of monorail track? Integrate some curves in it. I know that you just want to finish this though, so then my one gripe would be Kyle's suggestion/raising the umbrellas one unit [look a little low to me].
Overall this looks really nice but I feel like it is a bit empty at some places (like for example the top left). I think adding some more foliage would make this look even better.
My biggest gripe are the coaster colors here. Rails are too bright, and the supports are too I think. Otherwise I think this is pretty nice. Probably doesn't need more foliage, but I would suggest clumping lush patches of it together rather than having it spread out like you have now.
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nin Offline
Fill these empty grass tiles with foliage.
SlayMeGaga Offline
^ but then you can't see the mowed grass :/
Sulakke Offline
I like this. The diagonal brake run looks nice. I think you should remove the rope fences in the places you used the wooden fences. I don't see the utility of having a double fence.
Stoksy Offline
Any way you could make that rapids barrier out of monorail track? Integrate some curves in it. I know that you just want to finish this though, so then my one gripe would be Kyle's suggestion/raising the umbrellas one unit [look a little low to me].
Recurious Offline
Overall this looks really nice but I feel like it is a bit empty at some places (like for example the top left). I think adding some more foliage would make this look even better.
Faas Offline
I'm strongly disaagreeing this needing more foliage.
Steve Offline