Screenshot / TBA Jungle Area - Jim City Amusement Park

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  Jappy Fan Online

  WOOOW!! Nothing but love and praise!

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  RCTER2 Offline

  So good!

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  Coasterbill Offline

  Holy shit this is good.

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  Steve Offline

  Architecture is pretty solid but the atmosphere isn't there for me. I think this could benefit from some different path; doesn't seem too jungly. Keep some of the red brick but lose the other stone path and try a dirt path. Also, more lush foliage!
  
  Great work.
  
  Oh and try and give your raft and coaster stations a bit more character. They're technically good and very clean but I feel like they're missing something.

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  Recurious Offline

  Reminds me a bit of a combination of Disney Earth and Extinction. Looks very good!

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  Liampie Offline

  I really like the theming on the left and along the river, with the building arching over the river and such. Just a shame the buildings on the right side of the screen are generic, cliche super boring metal roof fests. You can do better than that! And I agree with Steve on the foliage too.
  
  Good screen.

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  inthemanual Offline

  The station building is great, i really like it a lot. I'd think the grill building could use a bit of work though, it seems to match the station too much, and I think it's missing a chimney.

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  JimmyLaessig Offline

  thanks for all your input guys! A chimney would probably solve most of the smoke issues in the restaurant.. no wonder no one is dining there....
  I'm at least gonna revisit the roof.. I already changed the path textures to a more dirty look, added some more foliage, etc

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  nin Offline

  The cluster of buildings center-left with the boat and bridge is great. Best thing in the screen. I'll agree with Steve in saying that the atmosphere isn't quite there yet. It feels too... Main Street-like. Like a Main Street area but with jungle buildings. It's too planned and lacks an organic look and feel. Maybe more trees and rubble and overgrowth?

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  bigshootergill Offline

  I would simply be repeating what others have already said, they've given you some great ideas to improve. It's great to see some new Jimmy work though, keep it comin'!

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  G Force Offline

  Its all well made but just doesn't feel organic in terms of layout.  Might be all the right angles and such but maybe implement more diagonals or even curves into your path.  You could probably clean up the bridge over the river boat ride as well, some clipping objects there.  Good to see some full scale work form you, I'm definitely interested in this project thus far.

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  Stoksy Offline

  I'd echo much of the above comments. I would perhaps also suggest restricting the light-brown steel roof to just the coaster station. I think it looks good there, but is trivialised by the smaller building with exactly the same roof texture and colour. It detracts from the main building. Maybe try wooden roofs?

   

  Excellent work overall, just the cena path doesn't fit at all with the jungle vibe that much of the architecture is portraying.

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