I really like your work, man. Got a lot of potential, but a lot of rough edges too.
Some thoughts: - Fix the landscaping please! - Imagine you're walking up that path from the bottom right. What are walking towards? A horror area? No, a giant sculpture of a footballer kicking an oversized ball. That's not the vantage point you want... Block the view with an interesting building or move the football player would be a good solution. Even if there wasn't a path leading up the football player like that, visual borders between areas will make your park flow much better. - The corners of your roofs are weird, because there's pieces of wall visible. You should fill those gaps with corner pieces, or colour the wall pieces so that it blends in with the roof texture. Unless this is fully intentional of course, who knows. - One of the golden tips of RCT2: add a land texture under your path.
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nin Online
Terrarea?
RMM Offline
a terrorareaum for ghosts.
chorkiel Online
Make it a bit less blocky on the landscaping and pathing and I love it.
Liampie Offline
Some thoughts:
- Fix the landscaping please!
- Imagine you're walking up that path from the bottom right. What are walking towards? A horror area? No, a giant sculpture of a footballer kicking an oversized ball. That's not the vantage point you want... Block the view with an interesting building or move the football player would be a good solution. Even if there wasn't a path leading up the football player like that, visual borders between areas will make your park flow much better.
- The corners of your roofs are weird, because there's pieces of wall visible. You should fill those gaps with corner pieces, or colour the wall pieces so that it blends in with the roof texture. Unless this is fully intentional of course, who knows.
- One of the golden tips of RCT2: add a land texture under your path.
math Offline
Thank you all.
I'm returning to this park after 4 years and I'm sad because I didn't select some of good objects like path corners.
One question, what is the best version of 8cars?
"a terrorareaum for ghosts" => I'll open the park =).