Lovely screen man, this park is spectacular. That decorative water stream is awesome, can't believe no one ever does that. At least not like this.
I've got some criticism, anyway!
- I'm not convinced by the diamonds on the Shoot the Chutes. The edges are too sharp. Some simple rounded arches above the track would be much more effective I think. Also, the current diamond shapes rhyme with the custom flat and it takes away from its uniqueness a bit. - Maybe you're too liberal with the use of purple. It doesn't look good on the 1x1 towers at the top. - A purple hut for Noah's ark? Really? I get that you've established a formula to achieve a coherent look for this park, but in case of very specific theming elements like Noah's Ark I think you could and should deviate from the formula a bit. Wood, man. The most obvious option is the best one in this case. - More on purple: I'd swap the purple for a brighter colour in that big billboard. Bright blue perhaps; or black; maybe peach?
The top of the screen could use a few more windows just to make t a more consistent density, however its still just fantastic, some of the best LL ever. Just needs a few little touches I can't quite put my finger on to make it perfect.
It's really cool. I find the spacey fence thing on the path a bit overwhelming, perhaps use it more appropriately. A thing I really love how there's so much track used here but it doesn't feel too overpowering.
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csw Offline
+1 for dolphin statue
Jonny93 Offline
Fantastic
Liampie Offline
I've got some criticism, anyway!
- I'm not convinced by the diamonds on the Shoot the Chutes. The edges are too sharp. Some simple rounded arches above the track would be much more effective I think. Also, the current diamond shapes rhyme with the custom flat and it takes away from its uniqueness a bit.
- Maybe you're too liberal with the use of purple. It doesn't look good on the 1x1 towers at the top.
- A purple hut for Noah's ark? Really? I get that you've established a formula to achieve a coherent look for this park, but in case of very specific theming elements like Noah's Ark I think you could and should deviate from the formula a bit. Wood, man. The most obvious option is the best one in this case.
- More on purple: I'd swap the purple for a brighter colour in that big billboard. Bright blue perhaps; or black; maybe peach?
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alex Offline
Have you not read the bible Liam?:
Then God said to Noah "make for yourself an Ark of purple walls and ghost train windows"
Cocoa Offline
I like it, but I still reckon you use too much/too wide path. Needs more landscaping showing IMO to get that good LL atmosphere.
][ntamin22 Offline
This is such a wild park. Love it.
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The top of the screen could use a few more windows just to make t a more consistent density, however its still just fantastic, some of the best LL ever. Just needs a few little touches I can't quite put my finger on to make it perfect.
Poke Offline
It's really cool. I find the spacey fence thing on the path a bit overwhelming, perhaps use it more appropriately. A thing I really love how there's so much track used here but it doesn't feel too overpowering.
posix Offline
This is pretty incredible. So much character. Really healthy mix of traditional LL chemistry and modern design means.