Screenshot / Thunder Canyon

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  inthemanual Offline

  To be honest, everything. It's a sprawl of different fences, different paths, different roofs, no recurring textures or colours. No eyecatchers. No flow! You could swap any element with anything and the screen wouldn't get messier.
  

  
  There's only 2 paths, 2 roofs, and 2 fences anywhere in the screen. I get the lack of recurring elements, but there's simply not enough things here for me to do that. The fences are only different because of the quarter tile that parts of the one are on. I could try harder to match those up, but then I think I'd lose something else.
  
  
  
  

  I have to agree with Dr_Dude. Especially the area behind the red building is very confusing. What is that? An unnecessary back lot? I hope it's due to that it is unfinished.
  

  
  It's the area for the rapids to drain into when its shut off. They all need that space, and for some reason it never exists in NE parks. Yeah, I could spice it up a bit, but you can only see a small sliver of it from any direction, so I didn't think it'd be worth it.

  posted 9 years ago

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  Sulakke Offline

  
  It's the area for the rapids to drain into when its shut off. They all need that space, and for some reason it never exists in NE parks. Yeah, I could spice it up a bit, but you can only see a small sliver of it from any direction, so I didn't think it'd be worth it.

   

  I get it. Maybe grey is the most appropriate color of the basin floor, but I think a different color, like brown, would make the area less confusing. And I'd thicken the walls of the red building a bit. I understand it is a fake facade, but it would make the area clearer as well and look less unfinished.

  posted 9 years ago

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  inthemanual Offline

  
  

  I get it. Maybe grey is the most appropriate color of the basin floor, but I think a different color, like brown, would make the area less confusing. And I'd thicken the walls of the red building a bit. I understand it is a fake facade, but it would make the area clearer as well and look less unfinished.

   

   

  Kumba's Off-white path perhaps? tint of brown, but a lighter shade, which is what I want.

  posted 9 years ago

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