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  Cocoa Offline

  I think that brown building on the left is getting there. Overall suggestions: higher buildings, more cohesion. The colors are a bit off and im not really seeing the theme, but i think its meant to be caribbean? Take a look at some real buildings and try to emulate the styles and architectural pieces you see there

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  navalin Offline

  The brick building on the right with the funky roof is very cool. The one with the long balcony just to the left of it is meh. The rest are decent. I don't like the sudden shift from red brick to white. Not sure if there's a way to get that to transition better, even if just going to asphalt for a bit. I don't think there's much reason to switch from one type of brick to another. 

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  TheDarkMaxim Offline

  Im really not aiming for cohesion. Its meant to ecclectic with many different styles.

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  navalin Offline

  Being eclectic isn't a problem. Not blending them well is. 

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  Poke Offline

  Tone down your scale a bit more; your buildings are unnecessarily massive.

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