Top half is great bottom half is not really. Supports feel a little simple and plain on the coaster, and I assume the foliage isn't done there. Other than that it just feels really brown, maybe use a different path texture and experiment with the roof color on the station a bit, just to spice it up a little.
I don't mind if this stays as it is, maybe a few smaller touches of color. But the areas around this shot can't be as brown as this or it will be "Brown Crap Fest 2015"
It is indeed very brown, but at least it is consistent and well done. I'm getting autumnal vibes, so that is good! I wouldn't mind some splashes of colour at all, but I think it would be nice if you stuck with autumnal colours. So no blues and purples.
I'm getting autumnal vibes, so that is good! I wouldn't mind some splashes of colour at all, but I think it would be nice if you stuck with autumnal colours.
This! Add color through autumn trees. Too bad there isn't a autumn leaves object to cover the ground with. You've got a nice little park going here Andrew!
I think this all looks great! I really like the shape of the station building - very neatly developed without being too large for the coaster type. The brown doesn't bother me at all, as it's clearly a wood structure heavy area, and you've included several splashes of colour to break it up. That, and the lake/pond itself adds a nice pool of blue. The boardwalk looks fantastic and, like the station, is not too large for its setting. Very, very good work here.
The bottom right area blacked out and the empty planters in the bottom left (suggestions please) are the only unfinished parts of this screen. I am of course open to suggestions regarding the rest though.
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Jonny93 Offline
Good job on that screen, it oozes a great atmosphere.
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Mattk48 Fan Offline
That is awesome. Love this screen and its atmosphere. Yellow or orange flowers in the planter id say. great station
Jappy Online
Very good stuff! I love it. Maybe a bit too brown? But that's just a nitpick. I can see it work as it is.
csw Offline
brown
G Force Offline
Top half is great bottom half is not really. Supports feel a little simple and plain on the coaster, and I assume the foliage isn't done there. Other than that it just feels really brown, maybe use a different path texture and experiment with the roof color on the station a bit, just to spice it up a little.
A n d r e w Offline
G Force, I feel like the foliage under the coaster makes more sense when viewed as a whole, so here it all is from another angle.
G Force Offline
I was referring more to the queue when talking about the foliage, sorry about that, it looks really nice under the coaster actually.
Rofl Fan Offline
It looks rustic and calm, I love it.
navalin Offline
Awesome screen, but definitely scrap the dark brown paths. I feel like a little bit of brick could keep it rustic without the brown.
Stoksy Offline
Probably too brown, some strange sunken tree choices (chinese cedar).
Agree with G Force, the foliage under the coaster is very good, but the queue needs some colour.
bigshootergill Fan Offline
I don't mind if this stays as it is, maybe a few smaller touches of color. But the areas around this shot can't be as brown as this or it will be "Brown Crap Fest 2015"
A n d r e w Offline
Well the park is only about 1/3 of the way done at this point actually so expect brown crap fest 2016
zxbiohazardzx Offline
great architecture and atmosphere. cant wait for more!
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Austin55 Offline
Very nice.
bigshootergill Fan Offline
This! Add color through autumn trees. Too bad there isn't a autumn leaves object to cover the ground with. You've got a nice little park going here Andrew!
Chocotopian Offline
I think this all looks great! I really like the shape of the station building - very neatly developed without being too large for the coaster type. The brown doesn't bother me at all, as it's clearly a wood structure heavy area, and you've included several splashes of colour to break it up. That, and the lake/pond itself adds a nice pool of blue. The boardwalk looks fantastic and, like the station, is not too large for its setting. Very, very good work here.
Coasterbill Offline
I love everything except that under supported turn on the second screenshot.