Yeah, needs more content. Your screen is literally trees and a bare layout. No supports, no real sense of landscaping, nothing. You're only using at most 4 tree types, repeated for miles.
This all isn't bad, but it's nothing. I suggest looking at other parks around the site and in real life, looking at how theme parks are laid out and how rides are built and placed in their environments. Do this to learn how things really work and then take from that what you will and create your own work.
I'm not saying copy real life and only build realistically, but learn the foundations of theme parks and build upon that. Along with that, this site has dozens of topics relating to park building and a plethora of members that can help you out along the way. This may come off as daunting, but tons of members have started off terribly and ended up being among the best, just takes time to do so. You'll get there.
Nin is completely right. We should of course be encouraging new players to post screens here, but when the screen is showing "look I can randomly place trees" then there's no real point to sharing that kind of thing.
I used to be like that, being really proud of a few trees but the longer you look at other parks, screens, etc. you really understand how bland and boring that is. It's an interesting coaster element, I personally think that it's a bit too drawn out, but it ultimately isn't showing anything.
Hello there, this is my very first post here! I've been an avid fan of what has appeared on this site, so I wanted to get started! Mountain Flyer is an WIP NCSO Intamin Wing Coaster. Please give me constructive criticism!
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Jamaka2001 Offline
Can't seem to post it in the comments, so here is an album of the other screenshots.
nin Offline
sg?
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Austin55 Offline
Foliage
G Force Offline
Needs more content
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RCT2day Offline
I think the coaster literally goes through a tree at one point. Try not to do that. Rides are meant to be enjoying by the living.
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Yeah, needs more content. Your screen is literally trees and a bare layout. No supports, no real sense of landscaping, nothing. You're only using at most 4 tree types, repeated for miles.
This all isn't bad, but it's nothing. I suggest looking at other parks around the site and in real life, looking at how theme parks are laid out and how rides are built and placed in their environments. Do this to learn how things really work and then take from that what you will and create your own work.
I'm not saying copy real life and only build realistically, but learn the foundations of theme parks and build upon that. Along with that, this site has dozens of topics relating to park building and a plethora of members that can help you out along the way. This may come off as daunting, but tons of members have started off terribly and ended up being among the best, just takes time to do so. You'll get there.
Stoksy Offline
Nin is completely right. We should of course be encouraging new players to post screens here, but when the screen is showing "look I can randomly place trees" then there's no real point to sharing that kind of thing.
I used to be like that, being really proud of a few trees but the longer you look at other parks, screens, etc. you really understand how bland and boring that is. It's an interesting coaster element, I personally think that it's a bit too drawn out, but it ultimately isn't showing anything.
Mattk48 Offline
Maybe add a third type of tree and some srubs to vary the landscape. Custom supports would help. Just not much to see