Screenshot / Alpine

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  posted 9 years ago

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  csw Offline

  Apologies for bad quality, fixed version here.....

   

  

  posted 9 years ago

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  Stoksy Offline

  I kind of wish that the first turn out of the station wasn't a small one. The pirate walls only look good in moderation and I think you're maybe borderline here, perhaps consider integrating the pirate walls with different walls (wood?).

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  inthemanual Offline

  Needs more brick and wood and less pirate wall I think. Still doesn't look bad.

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  Liampie Offline

  It's borderline too simple, especially the cliff area. I think you should try to fit in more details in your work. Micro without macro is chaos, but macro without micro is hollow. Otherwise this is very good, and I'm very excited for this park! Are you going to let peeps in?

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  Louis! Offline

  I like it, nice work!

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  csw Offline

  I'm almost at the point where peeps will be added. Getting close. 

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  Chocotopian Offline

  The sunken maze looks cool, but I'd suggest adding a fence around the adjacent path, save peeps falling in! A few further details on the walls wouldn't go a miss, as others have said, but I do appreciate the brightness those pirate walls bring while still fitting a wood-heavy theme.

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