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19-September 15
Keverdal Kingdom
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Poke Offline

I love the foliage but the rest looks similar to all your other work.
posted 9 years ago
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Liampie Offline

I definitely get Anton Pieck vibes from this. It's not his style, but it's quite obvious that you took the Anton Pieckplein as an example. i think it works well, though like Poke says it's very similar to the stuff you've been doing already. Something else that is good is the distribution of the planters and the path widths. Very well composed, especially on the left! Something that doesn't work well is the foliage. The gold on the birches is just too shiny. Try normal yellow or olive colour maybe?
posted 9 years ago
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bigshootergill Offline

Dito Liam... change the tree color... everything else is great!
posted 9 years ago
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Jappy Offline

I love the foliage but the rest looks similar to all your other work.

Yeah, well.... I've been doing some other stuff as well besides this together with Thirteen, and that is a very different sort of thing from my usual stuff so this is just to keep myself while it's his turn to build.
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csw Offline

I think the gold works with the cedar trees but not the birch trees.
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Chocotopian Offline

The planters are really well done. I like the autumnal feel of this screen, and the small scale of the buildings works well too.
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