Screenshot / Cyclone

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  posted 9 years ago

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  Jappy Offline

  Very nice contrasts of colour, the buildings look nice and cute. But even though I'm not an expert, that coaster looks oversupported.

  posted 9 years ago

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  Xeccah Offline

  even though i know what you've basically copied in this screen, its still your best work. master studies are good, but youd need to emulate more than just architectural forms if so.

  posted 9 years ago

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  J. Taylor Offline

  This is actually quite nice. I like the color combinations! I don't do custom supports myself, but still this looks a little too much. I expect it's not finished though. The tower building at the bottom left could use some extra details.

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  G Force Online

  The loop supports are fucking awful, but other than that there are some very solid things here.  Your architecture looks really good, just might be a little plane so far.  I'd maybe vary your path textures a little more and make them flow a little more naturally than just 90* corners and straight edges.  Foliage and stuff is good though, unique and appealing.

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  Chocotopian Offline

  Lovely trim work on the buildings. I agree about the loop supports, but I've never been a support expert so I can't suggest any reasonable alternative. Just... less of them I guess. With regards to the colours, there's a nice mix here, but I think the oranges stand out too much. Everything seems to be following a muted or pastel approach, but I think the orange awnings over the queue and over the glass doors contrast too much.

  posted 9 years ago

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