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  posted 9 years ago

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  Xeccah Offline

  You're actually pretty great at making architectural forms. The lack of a little detail and refinement makes this feel less immersive than how it can look. I'm not saying to go for a lot, but a little helps, even in NCSO. Another thing to look out for is color cohesion, as right now expecially a lot of your trim colors and textures don't compliment adjacent buildings. A good example is the green/brown metal trims, which don't fit the theme or feel at all.

   

  I don't like the abrupt theme change nor do I think having that much roof is anywhere near realistic.

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  J. Taylor Offline

  Thanks again for the useful comment. I always find it difficult to find more detailing in NCSO, without looking overcrowded and incoherent. I used the metal trims to experiment for a little variation but I agree they might not have been the best choice for this theme. The park is almost finished so I'll try to release it soon!

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  G Force Offline

  I'd maybe add some foliage or Egyptian rocks under the water to break it up a bit, seem like a big blank space now and distracts from the architecture.

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  Coasterbill Offline

  Very nice... but some asshole put a garbage can on your train tracks.

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  J. Taylor Offline

  
  

  Very nice... but some asshole put a garbage can on your train tracks.

   

   

  It must have been there for ages, how on earth didn't I notice. Thanks for pointing it out to me

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