I really like the second screen. The colours around the tilt-a-whirl are a wacky combination but I think they work well here. I'm not entirely sure what theme/feel you're going for here, but I think it will develop and refine as you continue the area. Wherever it goes though, it looks like a lot of fun!
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Liampie Offline
It reminds me of early Jazz, by the way.
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Xeccah Offline
poke's screen is a lot more fleshed out than anything on MJR, though. it's closer in soul to isole calabria
Poke Offline
Can someone tell me what MJR stands for?
Xeccah Offline
madly joyful realms by jkay and some other dudes
trav Offline
YES! I was thinking exactly this as soon as I looked at it. Man, Jazz left just as his work was becoming interesting.
Marshy
Jkay
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ida Offline
I liked the original screen more. It felt a bit more detailed. The buildings in the new one seem a bit more generic and repetitive.
Chocotopian Offline
I really like the second screen. The colours around the tilt-a-whirl are a wacky combination but I think they work well here. I'm not entirely sure what theme/feel you're going for here, but I think it will develop and refine as you continue the area. Wherever it goes though, it looks like a lot of fun!