Is the tall brown pole in the middle a roto-drop? It feels a out of place. I feel like it needs to be covered a little higher or something. Otherwise its a cool screen, I really like that combo of the wood fence, the porch fence, and the castle window that you've used.
I like the sign and the building, nice an simple. Only thing in not a fan of is the archery range, seems a little out of place and forced. Another building or tower would look much better in that location.
I'm not really sure of the theme here, but it's interesting all the same. The queue looks pretty good, meandering up the hill, and the inclusion of bones is a nice touch. However, I'd suggest trying out some darker colours (or at least, less brown) on the building and surrounding area to emphasise the doom part. Perhaps try the grey roof pieces on the building, and change some of the existing greys and browns to black.
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PizzaWurscht Offline
feels a bit random, i like the colours.
flying banana dino Offline
Is the tall brown pole in the middle a roto-drop? It feels a out of place. I feel like it needs to be covered a little higher or something. Otherwise its a cool screen, I really like that combo of the wood fence, the porch fence, and the castle window that you've used.
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soluna Offline
I just feel that the building is a tad too busy... the archery range also could use a darker terrain. Other than that, it looks great.
Chocotopian Offline
I'm not really sure of the theme here, but it's interesting all the same. The queue looks pretty good, meandering up the hill, and the inclusion of bones is a nice touch. However, I'd suggest trying out some darker colours (or at least, less brown) on the building and surrounding area to emphasise the doom part. Perhaps try the grey roof pieces on the building, and change some of the existing greys and browns to black.
Poke Offline
I like the structure however I would suggest a different texture surrounding it, like more dirt and rock, to add to the theme.