This screen is incredibly unreadable, with catwalks as roof trim, the oddly placed queue, how thick and natural the foliage is in spots where it realistically should be maintained and groomed, and lack of color harmony adding to the problem.
having that much unbroken path and widening the pathway up without a good purpose of doing so is bad composition in my eyes.
The square queue with diagonal railings really bothers me for some reason. Also, yeah, too many catwalks as roof borders. There's a lot of great ideas and execution, but it all gets lost in the clutter of colours, textures, and forms.
To me the biggest thing that detracts from this screen is the path texture itself. By having that dirt looking path it makes it seem like the ride is not yet finished itself, or maybe that could be due to a lack of peeps so the area feels sort of dead.
Don't listen to the haters Coupon, this is brilliant. However, you're missing some great foliage opportunities with the expanse of grey path in front of the custom flat...its begging for some beautifully done planters.
I havent got a problem with the catwalks for the first time, but its more and more too much. I also think the Grey squarre is too big and i like it more with the bricks.
But the Architecture is top. Really realistic and not to much.
EDIT: remove some catwalks and its fine.
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Jappy Offline
Looks prety damn amazing to me!
ida Offline
still too much blue
still too much catwalks
Austin55 Offline
To many catwalks for sure.
RWE Offline
Due to these catwalks it looks a little bit to messy for my eyes, otherwise this is awesome!
Coasterbill Offline
Love it...
Xeccah Offline
This screen is incredibly unreadable, with catwalks as roof trim, the oddly placed queue, how thick and natural the foliage is in spots where it realistically should be maintained and groomed, and lack of color harmony adding to the problem.
having that much unbroken path and widening the pathway up without a good purpose of doing so is bad composition in my eyes.
65%
robbie92 Offline
The square queue with diagonal railings really bothers me for some reason. Also, yeah, too many catwalks as roof borders. There's a lot of great ideas and execution, but it all gets lost in the clutter of colours, textures, and forms.
Maxwell Offline
To me the biggest thing that detracts from this screen is the path texture itself. By having that dirt looking path it makes it seem like the ride is not yet finished itself, or maybe that could be due to a lack of peeps so the area feels sort of dead.
Otherwise I think the rest looks great!
csw Offline
"Done with the park unless I add something else"
Story of BLAP's life....
Coasterbill Offline
"Done with the park unless I add something else"
so... giga?
Steve Offline
Don't listen to the haters Coupon, this is brilliant. However, you're missing some great foliage opportunities with the expanse of grey path in front of the custom flat...its begging for some beautifully done planters.
PizzaWurscht Offline
But the Architecture is top. Really realistic and not to much.
EDIT: remove some catwalks and its fine.
trav Offline
I love it. The mesh of colours and textures works really well for me.