Screenshot / Hor'Uz

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  Cocoa Offline

  anyone except the top left are good

   

  although I prefer the original white

  posted 9 years ago

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  nin Offline

  The path is so squared off. The fence kills it.

  posted 9 years ago

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  Ride6 Offline

  I think I agree with the "it's the supports" crowd.  Dark purple, black, or just a darker brown would probably work better for them.  I really like white for the track.

   

  If you have the angled pieces available it would be worthwhile to cut some of the sharper edges of the path.  Or maybe just place some "potted plants" or "street vendors" or something near the corners to mellow them out.

  posted 9 years ago

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  FredD Offline

  I have an angled piece of the path, but only with grass on the other side...

  posted 9 years ago

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  Liampie Offline

  There is a full tile diagonal piece of this texture.

  posted 9 years ago

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  FredD Offline

  Did not know that, gonna search that one up.

  posted 9 years ago

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  Liampie Offline

  http://www.nedesigns...-st-petersburg/

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  BelgianGuy Offline

  path need somelove not only in shape but also in life...

  coaster colours are fine although I'd personally suggest the track being deep blue, the foliage desperatly needs some love and the general architecture is very blocky and needs more depth both in terms of shape and details, get some life in there, I know peeps will add a ton but I don't think that alone will solve it... the architecture is very bulky and I know that's the theme, but don't use that as an (sorry for the harsh word) excuse to not extend the theme into your own style, add canvasses, you need shade in a warm country, they're also a good way of adding colour where there is generally lacking in a brown/tan based palette like you have with this theme

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  Louis! Offline

  Fantastic work Fred! Your best yet! You keep getting better and better.

   

  Love the white track!

  posted 9 years ago

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  FredD Offline

  Thanks for all the feedback I'm getting. It is not only motivating, but also very helpfull.

   

  One question: when said "foliage needs some love", any suggestions on how to?! I've put in another tree but guess there must be something else done. 

  posted 9 years ago

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