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17-June 15
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Fred's Ultimate Coaster Kingdom
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The eye is fantastic!
Pretty good, the coaster colours are perhaps a little boring though. The white and light brown just don't pop like they should in my opinion.
Been thinking about the colors too. First choice was blue but already have a blue coaster nearby so didn't want to have 2 of those next to each other. This white blends in with the environment. Other choice I had was purple-ish.
Agree with Stoksy. Maybe some dark red for the track? The rest is just amazing.
There's also a red coaster next to it
See, every coaster will have another 2 or three coaster next to it. So they should have different colors in order to not look like one mass.
Try black.
Pretty amazing screen. I would make the log flume track piece that is merged into the other one completely blue so it doesn't stick out. Also try to add one more colour that pops out. Maybe make the collumns blue or something. Sounds weird but something a theme park would do, and would definitely add some life to the screen.
thats awesome, nice work
Looks great!
I think the white looks good, i'd just use some different support colours, they blend in with the other objects way too much. Other than that i think the coaster colour is fine.
Looks good. Hate the fence choice.
Try like an olive green
Fantastic, Fred. A few things to make it even better:
Add some of the quarter tile posts to the fences to spruce them up.
Taller wall/fence against the path that meets the water maybe? Could just be the angle messing with me.
I wouldn't merge the drop of the water ride so soon. Keep the splash boats track going a bit further to the bridge to try and hide the merged tracks.
Needs some diagonals in the paths, agreed with shotguns.
Foliage could use more love. Palm trees are good but use other full tile trees or Liam's larger ones! Even if this is a dry area thematically, the lush foliage in spots will shine. Also, FLOWERS.
Agreed with Faas on the black for the coaster. The biggest problem with the screen is that you have a lot of that tan color. Any change to the coaster colors will help.
Keep it up!
Thanks for the feedback! As for the fences: this is somehow the style of fence I want for this area but not the specific one. Liam said he would make them for, this are just placeholders.
Taller wall, think that is just the angle. Water is one unit lower already.
Is it possible to do the remerging of the flume without losing 'too much) thematisation?
Will look to add in more diagonal path. Also will relook the foliage using the feedback. Not gonna add flowers though, they don't fit the Egyptian theme at all imo.
For the colors, made some screens with the colors I like too (besides the white but everyone doesn't like it...)
bottom left!
Dark pink works very well yeah, i'd say black works the least. You should seriously change the support colours like i said earlier.