Screenshot / Fort 7: inner wall

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • G Force%s's Photo
    I think you can improve the area around the lower building and make this much better. Right now its just really dull, the lack of color hurts.
  • Jappy%s's Photo

    It's supposed not to look colourful. It's an old military base from WW1, slowly being transformed into a regional themepark.

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  • Faas%s's Photo

    I think it's a really interesting screen. Why have I never thought of this? Please don't change the colours. This could turn into something very cool!

  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    I think you haven't quite nailed the actual detailing and atmosphere of the real deal. it looks bigger IRL, and also a little more fanciful and overgrown. I can see why this would be cool to people who've been there but for everyone else (err, me) it doesn't really work unless you really crack that atmosphere +themeing.

  • thirteen%s's Photo

    i really liked that tunnel/bunker building, the form of the house on the lower end is a bit too simple/too straight. I know what you are going for but its just so symmetric and straight.

  • posix%s's Photo

    I think it's quite sweet.

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