Screenshot / Mainstreet :O
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31-March 15
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I like your architecture and I adore your choice of colours, but please take into consideration these three tips:
1. Work on your foliage. It looks horrible, it doesn't hurt to try and copy other people's foliage and develop your own style from there.
2. NEVER use that queue line, it looks out of place.
3. Spice up your paths. A few lamps, benches and planters here and there can't hurt.
Keep building, don't give up!
Listen to Faas, he hit the nail on the head.
This screen shows some very good skill in the architecture dept, which many new players struggle with (including myself). And you'll keep improving with effort. So you've got a great start with that skill set.
Foliage done right looks awesome, but it does take trial and error. Other player's can help a lot. It's best to have trees dense, nice and close together. Then use bushes as underbrush and to taper off your greenery.
the architecture is lovely, but it could be a bit more cohesive IMO. definitely listen to what the others said. i'm really looking forward to seeing more of you!
I like the queue
Needs more cohesion definitely, and I don't think the queue looks that out of place here.
My problem with the architecture is that they're all rectangle/squares. Whilst I admire the fact that you've at least not built them all in a line it does look quite messy at the moment. The red-roofed building is better [but still a rectangle] because it's bigger than the 2x2 and 2x3 that you've got elsewhere. I'd aim for larger buildings - it allows for better cohesion in my opinion.
Nice start, but definitely listen to Faas. I think that queue can work if done properly, but somethings off right here. Too much brown in the archy maybe?
it looks like a really unrefined fisch. which is a good thing, except for the unrefined part