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screen_1720 Le vol du Gorge

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Comment System Offline
    comment below
    posted 10 years ago
  • FredD%s's Photo
    Belgium FredD Offline

    Started with this:

     

    FUCK12.jpg

    posted 10 years ago
  • Faas%s's Photo
    Netherlands Faas Offline

    Much better man! Genuinely a good screen and the landscaping makes a lot more sense! 

    Edit: I don't like the umbrella colouring, doesn't make sense. 

    posted 10 years ago
  • FredD%s's Photo
    Belgium FredD Offline

    The umbrella's are colored like the flag of France, so I do think they make sense :p  I thought it'd be a funny detail.

    posted 10 years ago
  • Faas%s's Photo
    Netherlands Faas Offline

    It's not the fact that you used red, white and blue for the umbrellas, but the way you used those colours. Why don't the fringes underneath match the colour of the umbrella above? Now I'll stop nitpicking ;) . 

    posted 10 years ago
  • PBJ%s's Photo
    PBJ Offline

    much better man!

    I love to work with 1/4 bb ground blocks for landscaping

    posted 10 years ago
  • Brunooo%s's Photo
    Netherlands Brunooo Offline

    yes yes much better!

    posted 10 years ago
  • Cocoa%s's Photo
    Australia Cocoa Offline

    there you go. right track for sure.

    posted 10 years ago
  • ScOtLaNdS_FiNeSt%s's Photo
    United Kingdom ScOtLaNdS_FiNeSt Offline

    10x better 

    posted 10 years ago
  • Stoksy%s's Photo
    Australia Stoksy Offline

    Agree with everyone.

     

    The custom 'V' looks a little odd though, I think it would just look better if you got rid of it and just used the normal sign. It's not a ride sign so it isn't required in my opinion.

    posted 10 years ago
  • PBJ%s's Photo
    PBJ Offline

    Agree with everyone.
     
    The custom 'V' looks a little odd though, I think it would just look better if you got rid of it and just used the normal sign. It's not a ride sign so it isn't required in my opinion.


    Thats not a V it's a M from mistral...
    posted 10 years ago
  • FredD%s's Photo
    Belgium FredD Offline
    It was a 'M' from Mistral in the previous version. But that was wrongly placed ;) Now it is a 'V'.
    posted 10 years ago

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