Screenshot / Africa: Continent of Mystery

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 10 years ago

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  Stoksy Offline

  The overuse of those wooden poles really detracts from the screen in my opinion.

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  PBJ Offline

  To much poles sticking out of the wall.

  On the other hand the building misses some detail... i think its to plain

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  Louis! Offline

  I LOVE THE POLES

   

  Your work has such a nice feel to it, so simple, but still just so lovely. I think we have a future new liam on our hands here.

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  Poke Offline

  I love the poles too. Really good stuff.

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  bigshootergill Offline

  imho - I would say the poles are great to use on this building, but I would cut them back. Keep them on each tier of the building, but only let them run along the upper portion of each section. So take out the poles below the windows, and don't have 2 sets of poles running one row on top of another row.

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  Jappy Offline

  I understand the critcism about the overuse of the poles, but I think you would understand when you look up the inspiration by just typing Timbuktu into Google. Nevertheless, I will cut them back a little, and see how that looks.

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