Screenshot / Max's Electric Fields
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25-February 15
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That little stage is adorable!
And I love the colors of the coaster on the right
'Bout time you posted a screen. I do like this, some great colours and ideas here!
Wish you'd cropped the screen a little better though as the unfinished parts do draw some of the focus away from the better stuff.
I would agree with Stoksy, cropping would of been very helpful in this screen. But I like what you have, your use of gates and the premade buildings is quite nice.
So fun, so Faa--- wait.
So Maxwell.
That in-game western scenery building as a stage backdrop is fucking genius, wow. How has no one thought of that? Fun stuff here.
Cute. Nice little details.
Well, what a surprise! Lovely stuff.
Can tell it was a stream build, but once things are polished up, this would be brilliant.
Keep up the good work!
Pretty darn cool I would say
I don't why, but I kinda like those pre-made buildings you have in there, it somehow works in the chaos to me. It just all comes together to seem relaxed and fun.
It's interesting though, because you have some skill in building, when looking at things like the banner supports, foliage, and ncso archy in the top left, but the fact you chose to still incorporate the pre-made structures is intriguing.
Also I would consider changing the ride huts to different styles, to blend in a bit more.
How complete is this screen, would you say?
I love that little stage.
This is awesome.
told you people would like it
There's some great details here, it just seems a bit crowded and chaotic to me. Narrowing the colour palette down will help, as will finishing the buildings over the queues. Ferris wheel placement seems weird too (assuming it's surrounded by buildings).
Thanks for all the comments guys, I really appreciate it!
@Austin - Thanks, glad you like it! ;3
@Stoksy & G-Force - Yeah, I was trying to figure out paint, and kept messing it all up. Next time I'll definitely clean it up.
@nin - Bill thought the same thing when I first showed him this lol.
@Steve - Thanks! I'm pretty sure I did not come up with this though, haha.
@Louis - Thanks! I actually played around on your Fort Fun park, and have added a lot to it. Are you still building on it by chance?because I really liked what you have done so far on it.
@JJayMForce - Thanks, I'm glad you like my style! I was really happy with how the banners gave the building more rigidity than what the other objects could do. Regarding the huts, those will definitely be changed, and I'd say the screen itself is ~85%, and the park as a whole around there as well.
@CoasterBill - Thanks man! I really appreciate the review you gave me some time ago!
@Faas - I agree!
@Cocoa - Yeah, something about this park just seemed right for me! ;3
@alex - Thanks! It's funny you mention how its chaotic because I tend to have a hard time finishing things because of how organized things have to be for me, but I'll see if I can change some things. About the Ferris wheel, I was planning on having the bottom half of it be enclosed within the building, and the upper portion rise up out of the roof to offer a view of the park. Sorry the unfinished-ness of this screen kind of makes it hard to show what I plan on building...
Can I see what you've done with it?
@Louis - I have sent it now. Hope you like it!
this, alongside the gci, are my favorite parts of this map. this area here has the scenario style of liveliness that i think draws NE people to the scenario style (and faas, too) whenever there are so much more technical things being created. the rest of the map isn't great and doesn't have this feel, but if you're willing to re-do those and put more thought into their composition as well as details like you have here, i can see this map winning a bronze.