Screenshot / Revised entrance area
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06-February 15
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I don't like how you changed the benches to be colorful. The rest of the changes were good though.
Definitely an improvement, still not sure about the benches like ^ said. The color choice is still questionable as well.
Indeed, I shall revert back to the white benches I think yes. Any suggestions colour wise? I have actually changed the grey walkway colour to black which seems a bit better.
it's better, but that trellis is totally arbitrary and unpalatable, same with some of the colors. the form is fine, if a little too detailed which makes it hard to comprehend, but you can do loads more with the colors (actually, loads less) and the textures of the entrance gate.
be deliberate in what objects you put where, make sure they have a purpose and that they're contributing to the look and feel of what you want; i feel like half the details you've added actually are hurting the structure.
Yeah I understand the colours being a bit unpalatable as others have said, Im still un decided as to what colours and experimenting.
Did you think the trellis was the bad, do you mean the one above the pond? or the two that are on the second level of the structure?
Will bear that in mind what you have said about being deliberate with object placement. Which details do you think harm it then if you could give a couple of examples? Just so I can get a clear idea of what works and what doesn't and thus develop my style as I progress.
both trellises can be removed
lol guess you really don't like the trellises! I don't see how they're that bad! Everyone is welcome to their opinion though of course!
I just felt I needed something on the upper tier to keep in interesting and thought it would brighten the building up, the colour of the building once revised may make them look better possibly.