Screenshot / Tahendo Zoo

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 11 years ago

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  Xeccah Offline

  The composition is what detriments this screen. I don't think the narrow path in this instance is working in your favor.

  posted 11 years ago

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  CedarPoint6 Offline

  I'd be inclined to disagree in that respect.  The narrow path is about perfect for a zoo nature trail and seeing you do this when you tend to scale your paths to the opposite is a nice change.  I'd maybe consider a different path texture for that trail however.  I see what I expect to be some Atlanta zoo in that shot.  Quite nice.

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  Xeccah Offline

  I kind of got that, CP6, but whenever I think of a nature trail there is usually a way not to go through it besides turning completely around.  I also feel the trail a little too artificial at the moment.

  posted 11 years ago

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