The colours are fair enough but I think that it looks very simplistic for me, which can work at times but the monster trucks going through the building really ruins it for me. Maybe something like the Virginia Reel coaster would 'work' better but I think that you'd be better off without any ride at all.
I'm more interested in the building to the left to be honest because there seems to be more going on. The arches and foliage roof are nice touches but I don't quite agree with the textures here. I think that getting rid of the almost gimmicky ride would help you focus a little more on the form and style of the building which is lacking for me.
I agree on the ride, it just doesn't seem to fit in the screen, however it very well could fit depending on the rest of the park. The major complaint for me is the color choice, too much orange, should be more cool colors to balance it out. Other than that it looks good I like the architecture for what it is, path and foliage is fine.
I'm not a fan of the monster truck going through the building too. Feels a bit 'cheesy'. I do like your buildings though. And the path is very nice too.
Cheers guys. I agree that it is rather cheesy, but I'm going to keep the monster truck ride. It travels through the most of the buildings in this area and gives the upper stories some purpose. It's supposed to be like a trade truck, dropping off goods to the different shops. I'll probably try to spice up that section of bare track and supports though.
6 Comments
Comment System Offline
Stoksy Offline
Not completely sold.
The colours are fair enough but I think that it looks very simplistic for me, which can work at times but the monster trucks going through the building really ruins it for me. Maybe something like the Virginia Reel coaster would 'work' better but I think that you'd be better off without any ride at all.
I'm more interested in the building to the left to be honest because there seems to be more going on. The arches and foliage roof are nice touches but I don't quite agree with the textures here. I think that getting rid of the almost gimmicky ride would help you focus a little more on the form and style of the building which is lacking for me.
G Force Offline
I agree on the ride, it just doesn't seem to fit in the screen, however it very well could fit depending on the rest of the park. The major complaint for me is the color choice, too much orange, should be more cool colors to balance it out. Other than that it looks good I like the architecture for what it is, path and foliage is fine.
][ntamin22 Offline
Poke Offline
I'm not a fan of the monster truck going through the building too. Feels a bit 'cheesy'. I do like your buildings though. And the path is very nice too.
Louis! Offline
I love it. Screams of the NE of old.
Chocotopian Online
Cheers guys. I agree that it is rather cheesy, but I'm going to keep the monster truck ride. It travels through the most of the buildings in this area and gives the upper stories some purpose. It's supposed to be like a trade truck, dropping off goods to the different shops. I'll probably try to spice up that section of bare track and supports though.