Screenshot / Station West
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15-December 14
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Landgoed de Graaf
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This is the most recent picture of my work in progress. I don't know if it's okay to post sometimes a update of the area, but I really want to learn how to play RCT2 so I love all the feedback I get on progress screens!
If it isn't allowed, just mention it and I will stop.
It is perfectly fine to show your progress this way, so we don't have to see the same area as a new screen on the front page everytime. If I were you, I would make the shrubs and grass pieces (and perhaps the leafs on some trees) a different shade of green, you know the lighter one. I think the grass is too dark now.
^I agree... I actually wish more people would do exactly what you're doing. This is shaping up very nicely by the way.
Yeah, like Faas said, make the grass objects lighter in colour. I'd also blend the path in a bit better, it's too square and angular and jagged, use a clean line to blend the brown path into the light path.
This is a very enjoyable screen! The atmosphere is great, and your hacking competence is already equal to most of this community. Most importantly, you are very open to constructive criticism and clearly your willingness to listen to it has produced an impressive level or progression. Keep it up and you'll do just fine!
I love this station.
@Intamin22: Thanks! Well them, especially for you I will show the most recent version. Cause I am still working at it.
Very nice, choice of path border is good.
That last screen is outstanding. The structures are unmistakably stations buildings (i.e. even if the tracks weren't there), and you haven't resorted to over-detailing to get there. I think it's due to the forms and scale, both of which you have got spot on. The composition is busy but clear, with plenty of little features dotted around and a great compliment of foliage. The corner cave/tunnel is a really nice addition too. Honestly, I have nothing to suggest to make this better. I only hope you continue to produce this level quality of work in the rest of the park. Again, a really, really lovely screen.
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lovely old skool feeling for me!