Screenshot / leviathan
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11-December 14
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Leviathan
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Just showing support work and a tiny bit of landscaping isn't particularly interesting to look at, nor does it really allow for any sort of feedback to be given because people have no idea how the coaster fits with it's surroundings.
I would suggest posting more finished screens. Maybe include some foliage and a building or two - something to show the theme that you're going for so people can then provide feedback for it. Supports have been done a million times before; they look fine but aren't anything new, interesting, or critique-able.
Compared to your previous screens, these supports are a drastic improvement
I'd suggest removing the photo thing. It takes away from the cleanliness of the screen. Otherwise I like this a lot and the color scheme is great.
^do that or try to put it inside that underground tunnel thing. It should never be seen.
I echo Stoksy. Post more finished screens. Your support work is good though. Just spend more time to finish the screen before posting.
I'd try to replace the section between the immelman and the helix by diagonal track.
hulkpower25 Offline
thank I will look over those things
you like your b&m wingriders don't you?
the supports are pretty good! nice job on those. but you're going to need a whole lot more context to make this look great, not just a hill or a cave.