Your transfer mechanism isn't connected on one side. The rest of what's going on is very...full. The black awnings are contrasting too much with the buildings and I'm not entirely sure what kind of theme you are trying to convey here.
I love this, but I agree with Stoksy about the transfer track.
Also, on the subject of the transfer track let's say it goes into the maintenance building... I'm getting the idea (though it's cut off) that it's an open air station without enough room for the train (or maybe even a pathway inside the station for peeps. It's hard to see in this screenshot but just make sure there's room for the train in there.
This is beautiful though... great colors and composition.
Thanks everyone for the comments. A bit of background info might be helpfull. I used to be a regular here on NE and started this project prob 8-9 years ago. Stopped playing for a while and went back to it but then i thought i lost everything until about a month ago when i found it on a random HDD i pulled out of an old computer. The park was meant to be an overgrown jungle-y theme i believe.
I remember pyro used to be one of my favourite parkmakers so thats probably why it may have some similarity to his work.
I have reworked the transfaer track. Any better? is a bit glithcy for some views, but will try to fix it up.
So who were you? Australia? i_c_ded_pplz? Don't ever remember you playing though.
The clash of classic and modern LL methods in that screen is somewhat shocking. The banner stack would have killed people back in the day you made the rest.
I am from Australia. Cant remember what my username used to be here. I had to create a new account a while ago. Thanks for the feedback. Will hopefully get a screen up sometime before Christmas.
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Stoksy Offline
Your transfer mechanism isn't connected on one side. The rest of what's going on is very...full. The black awnings are contrasting too much with the buildings and I'm not entirely sure what kind of theme you are trying to convey here.
Nice to see some LL though.
Liampie Offline
Who the fuck are you? You can't be new! I love it. Proper old school LL.
Coasterbill Offline
I love this, but I agree with Stoksy about the transfer track.
Also, on the subject of the transfer track let's say it goes into the maintenance building... I'm getting the idea (though it's cut off) that it's an open air station without enough room for the train (or maybe even a pathway inside the station for peeps. It's hard to see in this screenshot but just make sure there's room for the train in there.
This is beautiful though... great colors and composition.
Poke Offline
Really great. I think the black is a nice accent. The mazes and paths work well together as roofs. I want more.
Chocotopian Offline
A lovely blend of colours, structures and foliage. I like the way you haven't overdone the tracitecture too.
posix Offline
Very Pyro.
csw Offline
Ling Offline
Lovely.
Goliath123 Offline
good job mate
=Wilsige= Offline
Thanks everyone for the comments. A bit of background info might be helpfull. I used to be a regular here on NE and started this project prob 8-9 years ago. Stopped playing for a while and went back to it but then i thought i lost everything until about a month ago when i found it on a random HDD i pulled out of an old computer. The park was meant to be an overgrown jungle-y theme i believe.
I remember pyro used to be one of my favourite parkmakers so thats probably why it may have some similarity to his work.
I have reworked the transfaer track. Any better? is a bit glithcy for some views, but will try to fix it up.
posix Offline
So who were you? Australia? i_c_ded_pplz? Don't ever remember you playing though.
The clash of classic and modern LL methods in that screen is somewhat shocking. The banner stack would have killed people back in the day you made the rest.
Coasterbill Offline
I like this much better now.
=Wilsige= Offline
I am from Australia. Cant remember what my username used to be here. I had to create a new account a while ago. Thanks for the feedback. Will hopefully get a screen up sometime before Christmas.