Screenshot / Supercell Speedway
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22-November 14
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The Forces of Nature
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Bridge could do with some more support. Also, might want to define the track a little more; the tires are a good way of doing so but the rest of the track blends in a little too much in my opinion.
this is lovely, the station doesn't seem to be synchronized to the chaotic track though. it looks very modern and maintained while the track is the opposite of that. i'd re-do the station, or atleast recoulour it
I agree with Stoksy, I'd try the red dirt or pale sand.
^Or at least make the track the only thing that's plain dirt. Also, gijs is right about the station being too clean for the messiness of the rest of the ride.
Great layout and idea. I don't mind the ground textures, but if you can make the track-landscaping distinction more clear you should do that of course. The station feels out of place, thematically,
Good feedback fellas. Thanks for the tips. I'll throw another screen on here when I make some more adjustments, maybe tomorrow. I think I'll add in some grass/dirt along the outside of the track for more definition, and keep the station I already have but rough it up a bit. Kind of going for the 'busted-up-in-a-storm' look. So I'll adjust the bridge for more support, but make it a touch dishevelled as well.
Here's an updated shot of the track...
It's messy but I really like this anyway. The bridge is excellent.
The bright red doesn't work to me.
Nice subtle improvements made in the second screen. I like what you're going for with the station, and I think it's come off well. Not that it would make much difference, but I'd also like to see some kind of broken scenery hanging/arching over the track for the karts to go through. Good work.