Screenshot / Looping coaster

09-October 14

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posted 10 years ago
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inthemanual Offline

Train under the path looks amazing. Buildings are really flat though, and could use some definition.
posted 10 years ago
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navalin Offline

Hell yeah you improved. Nice work.
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nin Offline

There are some intense optical illusions going on with this screen.
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inthemanual Offline

I actually really like the foliage and rockwork and how they work together too.

The buildings really need some work though. They don't feel theme park-y at all, nothing's open and inviting, there's no indicator as to what they're for, and they don't seem to have any kind of theme or cohesive elements. I think you should scale them up a little, and try to make them more inviting. Look at some other main streets if you need a bit of inspiration.

Additionally, I don't like how the supports seem to just sit on the path in a couple places. Try to do something to separate them.

That lower section is amazing though, I love it.
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Super G Offline

I agree with the rest, add some purpose to the buildings (a restaurant or something) and add some depth to them. The rest of the screen is really good .
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Liampie Offline

I don't think you need depth... You need height! Your floors are too low.

The underground train is indeed awesome, but I also love the foliage.
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Coasterbill Offline

I actually like this a lot... now actually finish it. lol
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Xeccah Offline

facades need life. they're all flat
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