There are some nice things here but there's not much to comment on. I like the B&M's interaction with the woodie (though B&M rarely builds low profile 180 degree turns like that) ... I think the weakest screen is the one of the corkscrew coaster as the footers are way too big and the screen as a whole looks a bit messy. The entrance area is quite nice.
I agree that the entrance screen is the better one, but the gaps in the pathing look odd to me. It certainly has a quaint feel to it and I think it will look great when developed further. As for the other two screens, I think you should complete them more before showing them. At the moment, they look like rough ideas being tested out (and we've seen the double corkscrew arches many times before... although over a river is a nice variant).
Come on, you need to come up with more than that. The bottom two screens are literally one minute of work. I like the composition of the entrance screen, but I think the buildings are a tad too low (and that means a lot coming from me).
Little project that started out of boringness. Foliage hasn't been done yet (I really hate that + I'm really, really bad at it). But so far, I have a lot of fun building on this park.
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Coasterbill Offline
There are some nice things here but there's not much to comment on. I like the B&M's interaction with the woodie (though B&M rarely builds low profile 180 degree turns like that) ... I think the weakest screen is the one of the corkscrew coaster as the footers are way too big and the screen as a whole looks a bit messy. The entrance area is quite nice.
Chocotopian Offline
I agree that the entrance screen is the better one, but the gaps in the pathing look odd to me. It certainly has a quaint feel to it and I think it will look great when developed further. As for the other two screens, I think you should complete them more before showing them. At the moment, they look like rough ideas being tested out (and we've seen the double corkscrew arches many times before... although over a river is a nice variant).
Faas Offline
Come on, you need to come up with more than that. The bottom two screens are literally one minute of work. I like the composition of the entrance screen, but I think the buildings are a tad too low (and that means a lot coming from me).
Super G Offline
Thanks for the tips guys, maybe I picked the wrong peaces out of the park to show. I will post an overview later on