Screenshot / New Project (again)

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  FK+Coastermind Offline

  lolz, whut, its not terrible, but also, EVERY THEME HAS BEEN USED, like, zero coherent. Gotta bring it all back together

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  GammaZero Offline

  Oh no, just now I noticed the black supports D:

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  Liampie Offline

  This is way too random and chaotic for me. If that wasn't your goal I'd say start over, because this entrance is ruined beyond repair.

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  Chocotopian Offline

  I agree that this doesn't really work as a whole, but there are certain parts that I think would look great if lifted into another park.  That tight circular cluster of trees and flowers is a pretty cool mix, and I could totally see that working as an artificial garden in a space theme or something.  The stack of two gated fences used as cashier railings is a nice touch too and accurately gets the form across.

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  GammaZero Offline

  Okay, thanks for the critique guys, I'm gonna try starting yet another (sigh) project to see if I can do better.

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  Ling Offline

  Incredibly messy.

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  Dr_Dude Offline

  i want to see a completed screen from you. i think you're shooting for something that cant be captured with this little content

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