Screenshot / Nature Show

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  Comment System Offline

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  Faas Offline

  Getting there. Somehow you still have the tendency to make your buildings feel detached from their environment. It's hard to explain but you seperate your buildings from main paths, foliage and other buildings in such a way that it really looks detached. If you would have put the building on the main path, instead of putting it on a seperate branch of a path, you could have created beter visuals and incorporation. Now it is almost like it is a maintenance building purposefully hidden away in the back of the park, but that is not what you envisioned it to be. 

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  navalin Offline

  You've got the right elements,but the building still doesn't feel natural. Same as the past building, you either need to close the awkward gap between the roof and the walls using sloped walls, or just go for an open frame design. I think the general shape of the building is okay, but you could use to add some utilities/chimneys/vents poking through to break up the symmetry a bit. I think with the square on top I'd actually sink it into the roof instead of sticking it out as well. Foliage is generally nice but needs some bushes/shrubs (the small leaves/flowers/mushrooms are a nice touch). You have a lot of good stuff going on here, it's just a remaining nitpicky part that will make this perfect. 

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  Dusty Soul Offline

  
  

   

  Does this make it look less seperated 

   

  

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  Faas Offline

  Yes, but you put minimal effort into incorporating it by just adding some paths around the sides. But it's better.

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