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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 10 years ago

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  Coasterbill Offline

  I would hide your underground paths a little better... that one is kind of an eyesore. Overall there are some nice things here though. If the buildings were just a little less blocky this would be a great screen.

  posted 10 years ago

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  ida Offline

  Very blocky and probably not as good as it looks like here, but it does have a nice atmosphere and everything. Like Coasterbill said, your buildings are very blocky and undetailed, try improving them.

  posted 10 years ago

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  HJ_ Offline

  Thanks for the replies and advices guys. This is still under construction, i'm a slow builder. I will try to improve my buildings. Thank you.

  posted 10 years ago

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  Chocotopian Offline

  The coaster has a very tranquil feel to it.  As for the buildings, I think the snack hut works well as a square wooden shack, but the larger wooden buildings could use some variation.  I feel that, with a rectangular base, the upper sections need more deviation from this form, otherwise the entire building becomes rectangular.  Alternatively, you could try extending odd parts of the buildings towards the path, and adjusting the roofs as necessary to keep it interesting but neat.

   

  On a different note, you've got some nice foliage work going on towards the top of the screen

  posted 10 years ago

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